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Animal Nature
Hide it as we may
We all have a beast inside
Clawing to get out
It's in our nature
Push someone too far and see
True nature revealed
It is why we war
Why we argue and compete
See who leads the pack
Always full of hate
Seeking to finish the weak
Hide it as we may
Published 13th Oct 2013
| Edited 14th Oct 2013
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I like it! A haiku that images the inner beast and insanity inside us just barely being kept at bay.
Short but really good.
Short but really good.
13th Oct 2013 2:30pm
13th Oct 2013 2:36pm
13th Oct 2013 9:12pm
Thanks, everyone. I wanted to capture the inner beast that lurks within us all.
14th Oct 2013 00:55am
14th Oct 2013 11:55am
14th Oct 2013 12:48pm
Thanks, I find that identifying myself with my animal nature tends to flow pretty well. And thanks, I may even add more to.it later.
14th Oct 2013 12:51pm
14th Oct 2013 1:31pm
14th Oct 2013 1:40pm
19th Oct 2013 3:50am
Very Beautifully compose.
I can totally say you captured that inner beast in this write.
Excellent Poem!
Darker
I can totally say you captured that inner beast in this write.
Excellent Poem!
Darker
19th Oct 2013 1:39pm
