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Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant tongue in cheek! :)
My friends,have you ever noticed
how many reads you get?
The reads outway the comments
50/1 i bet!
So who are all these people
and what is it they seek?
They see the word *erotic*
and just *have* to take a peek!
i call them the Peeping Toms
they have no other name
embarrassed by their interest
and that is such a shame!
i bet you're sat there right now
gently stroking cock or clit
You may even read times over
until you start to spit
oh,please don't go,i beg you
Don't turn away and run
You havent finished reading yet
You havent even cum!
Ok,i'll see you next time
Please hurry back and read
You don't *have* to leave a comment...
Just make sure you spill your seed! ;)
how many reads you get?
The reads outway the comments
50/1 i bet!
So who are all these people
and what is it they seek?
They see the word *erotic*
and just *have* to take a peek!
i call them the Peeping Toms
they have no other name
embarrassed by their interest
and that is such a shame!
i bet you're sat there right now
gently stroking cock or clit
You may even read times over
until you start to spit
oh,please don't go,i beg you
Don't turn away and run
You havent finished reading yet
You havent even cum!
Ok,i'll see you next time
Please hurry back and read
You don't *have* to leave a comment...
Just make sure you spill your seed! ;)
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Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
9th Oct 2013 6:27am
re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
9th Oct 2013 6:30am
Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
9th Oct 2013 6:35am
re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
9th Oct 2013 6:39am
Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
9th Oct 2013 10:24am
it's in our nature: it's our passion that makes us poets. you are peeking in on all of us...
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re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
9th Oct 2013 11:25am
Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
9th Oct 2013 11:44am
lol definitely made me laugh! but you know what
On the serious side you're right to wonder what they want
never mind erotica, that tends to make a lot of undercover
pervs. Keep quiet lol but how about other subjects like
love, fantasy etc? I learned one 'peeper'
Was in fact a 'Lifter' of my work!
Loved you lil funny though my dear :)
On the serious side you're right to wonder what they want
never mind erotica, that tends to make a lot of undercover
pervs. Keep quiet lol but how about other subjects like
love, fantasy etc? I learned one 'peeper'
Was in fact a 'Lifter' of my work!
Loved you lil funny though my dear :)
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re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
9th Oct 2013 11:52am
lol...thanks PM.
noticed there's less reads on this one! Guess the title scared em away :( shame :p
noticed there's less reads on this one! Guess the title scared em away :( shame :p
Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 2:22pm
Most often anything that has to do with erotica gets the most hits, and i find that all those peeking toms are stealing and taking it to other sites, it has happened to some of us on here so just keep that in mind.
Funny and ironic piece, and to the point, excellent work Softtoy!
Funny and ironic piece, and to the point, excellent work Softtoy!
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re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
9th Oct 2013 6:10pm
Thanks Vee.Bloody theives!
Can't use their own brains,so steel yours instead! :(
Can't use their own brains,so steel yours instead! :(
Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
Anonymous
9th Oct 2013 4:16pm
i have to agree totally softtoy! there are numerous peekers here ..like Vee said stealers too! and since you're female you're likely to get even more reads on erotic pieces and comments usually..we boys might get 1/100 ..lol
and I don't resent the title at all..hahahaaa
~Tom
and I don't resent the title at all..hahahaaa
~Tom
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re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
9th Oct 2013 6:12pm
Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
18th Nov 2013 1:58pm
well done
if you've taken the time to read
make an honest critique
poets need feedback, good and bad
bravo
if you've taken the time to read
make an honest critique
poets need feedback, good and bad
bravo
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re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
18th Nov 2013 2:53pm
Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but meant t
Anonymous
19th Nov 2013 9:03pm
Love it...funny, and flows nicely
together;)
together;)
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re: Re: Peeping Toms (posted here to get the right audience)...but mea
19th Nov 2013 9:40pm