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"Attention whore" they say...
she walks around with her boobies out
short skirt revealing her assets
face hidden behind make-up . . .
she just wants to be worshipped
to be loved - treasured
but she only attracts the wrong crowd
one that only uses her, breaks her
and discards her when she is no longer
desired
all 'cause no one ever took the time
to tell her that she's precious
that she's worth a lot more than
one-night stands and a few seconds
of feeling appreciated by assholes
short skirt revealing her assets
face hidden behind make-up . . .
she just wants to be worshipped
to be loved - treasured
but she only attracts the wrong crowd
one that only uses her, breaks her
and discards her when she is no longer
desired
all 'cause no one ever took the time
to tell her that she's precious
that she's worth a lot more than
one-night stands and a few seconds
of feeling appreciated by assholes
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8th Oct 2013 1:46pm
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9th Oct 2013 5:42am
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8th Oct 2013 1:48pm
apparently i own way too many short skirts lol
I like this one cinth, deeper than just ink floating on the surface... it leaves me with questions about myself and others.
Nice one xo
I like this one cinth, deeper than just ink floating on the surface... it leaves me with questions about myself and others.
Nice one xo
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9th Oct 2013 5:45am
Hey,if you've got sexy legs flaunt them :D
I'm glad I could get you to ponder (:
I'm glad I could get you to ponder (:
Re: "Attention whore" they say...
8th Oct 2013 2:56pm
WOW, sweetheart honestly,
one of finest works I've ever read! Outstanding
and full of depth! :)
one of finest works I've ever read! Outstanding
and full of depth! :)
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9th Oct 2013 5:47am
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2013 3:17pm
and the honey draws the bad boys, who'll promise support while stripping her bare of her temporary honorable chastity for their own vanity
I've seen this so much, especially in younger women and often wondered what draws them like moths to the flame?
Thanks so much for this scribe my dear friend, a welcome read with so much to ponder.
Warm teddybear hugz :)
I've seen this so much, especially in younger women and often wondered what draws them like moths to the flame?
Thanks so much for this scribe my dear friend, a welcome read with so much to ponder.
Warm teddybear hugz :)
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9th Oct 2013 5:53am
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8th Oct 2013 3:34pm
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9th Oct 2013 5:56am
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2013 3:50pm
As someone said long time ago..girls need the attention and will try anything, boys want sex and will say anything..and that's the world we live in.
Nicely done Cinth.
Nicely done Cinth.
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9th Oct 2013 6:09am
And it's sad how doing "anything" demeanishes their self-worth. Self-respect and self-worth go out the window.
Thank you,Vee (:
Thank you,Vee (:
Re: "Attention whore" they say...
8th Oct 2013 4:10pm
So true, this morning saw someone just like that was going to try and talk to her then I conflicted myself and try to get in her pants or respect that she's not looking that kind of attention, anyway beautiful write.
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9th Oct 2013 6:24am
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8th Oct 2013 5:37pm
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8th Oct 2013 6:49pm
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9th Oct 2013 6:42am
She doesn't want to change though and that's the thing that saddens me.
Thank you,Michael (:
Thank you,Michael (:
Re: "Attention whore" they say...
8th Oct 2013 7:46pm
I love this. So many people criticize what they think is wrong but never bother to consider the reason for it. A well written poem!
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9th Oct 2013 6:47am
Haha,that's true.
Thank you,Gabriel. Your comment are always a pleasure to read xo
Thank you,Gabriel. Your comment are always a pleasure to read xo