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Sleeping in a window
I am sleeping in a window tonight
the Transamerica building is in my sight
down below it's strip clubs and blight
it's night and the city's lights sparkle so bright
I am sleeping safely in the city tonight
the Transamerica building is in my sight
down below it's strip clubs and blight
it's night and the city's lights sparkle so bright
I am sleeping safely in the city tonight
Published 5th Oct 2013
| Edited 6th Oct 2013
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Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 8:44pm
Guess beauties must really get to sleep
6th Oct 2013 3:13am
5th Oct 2013 8:47pm
6th Oct 2013 2:33am
Thank you very much.
I am glad to hear that u enjoy my reports from the
"frontlines"........
Btw I am equally interested in yours.........:)
I am glad to hear that u enjoy my reports from the
"frontlines"........
Btw I am equally interested in yours.........:)
Anonymous
5th Oct 2013 9:38pm
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6th Oct 2013 2:41am
I love your metaphors and the positive response to my
poem........ thank u :)
poem........ thank u :)
6th Oct 2013 2:42am
I love your metaphors and the positive response to my
poem........ thank u :)
poem........ thank u :)
Anonymous
6th Oct 2013 00:45am
Concise but complete
A treat to read
Kitty
A treat to read
Kitty
6th Oct 2013 2:38am
Thank you Kitty -- I have enjoyed reading your poetry and am flattered that you feel this way about my little poem.
7th Oct 2013 6:39am
Yes. The architectural structures are fascinating...
I will google that sometime....
I like all the little names you have for me.... :)
I will google that sometime....
I like all the little names you have for me.... :)
7th Oct 2013 12:58pm
The imagery of this is crisp
In fact I see that one stripclub, that's just calling my name!
Catch you later babe, I'm gonna go empty my pockets! lol
jk... Nice lil ink my friend :)
In fact I see that one stripclub, that's just calling my name!
Catch you later babe, I'm gonna go empty my pockets! lol
jk... Nice lil ink my friend :)
