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Gold Clumps
Into this I go unknown
fate so strange
nothing to own
darkened skies
yet hope peeks through
many moments of deja vu
much has been lost
yet love and wisdom are gain
gold clumps in my hands remain
fate so strange
nothing to own
darkened skies
yet hope peeks through
many moments of deja vu
much has been lost
yet love and wisdom are gain
gold clumps in my hands remain
Published 2nd Oct 2013
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2nd Oct 2013 3:06am
...all we need is a quick peek of hope. I really enjoyed this, scarlet! Xo
2nd Oct 2013 3:23am
I have been in a pretty depressed period of my life so
I cherish the times when hope peeks through....
Thank you for your comment.
I cherish the times when hope peeks through....
Thank you for your comment.
2nd Oct 2013 3:27am
This poem was written about 2 months ago during a very dark time at a Denny's diner in L.A.
Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment.
Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment.
2nd Oct 2013 3:37am
2nd Oct 2013 4:35pm
2nd Oct 2013 3:56am
Can truly relate to this n also know you can get thru it, if you
Have hope, you have a chance... Hold on my friend, hold on...
Have hope, you have a chance... Hold on my friend, hold on...
2nd Oct 2013 4:37pm
Thank you for your encouraging words.
A kind word and some encouragement is all
it takes sometimes...... :)
A kind word and some encouragement is all
it takes sometimes...... :)
17th Dec 2013 1:14am
Real good poem you got here. Being short, I like that, its difficult to make a short one and pull it off, but you nailed it.
