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Inspired By "Her Majesty" (thanks Mr.Beatle)
When I wore a younger man's clothes
sex was seen a bit like sport
romance like a sailor
a hot lass in every port
not that I was the ultimate romeo
my first intercourse was on a college night
and after it was completed
felt like something was missing alright
still a competition but now internally placed
except for wanting to see a smile on her lovely face
sex was seen a bit like sport
romance like a sailor
a hot lass in every port
not that I was the ultimate romeo
my first intercourse was on a college night
and after it was completed
felt like something was missing alright
still a competition but now internally placed
except for wanting to see a smile on her lovely face
Published 29th Sep 2013
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29th Sep 2013 2:09pm
29th Sep 2013 2:13pm
29th Sep 2013 5:11pm
This was dripping in adolescent truth n observations
N yea the things we'd do to make women smile huh? Excellent stuff bro!
N yea the things we'd do to make women smile huh? Excellent stuff bro!
29th Sep 2013 10:10pm
some of us are still trying to do them. (Jury is out on whether or not the rewards are smiles)
29th Sep 2013 10:52pm
30th Sep 2013 00:02am
30th Sep 2013 00:18am
indeed...I learned some of that art whilst waiting for that elusive prick-always chase the smile...its way more fullfilling...Godot creeps in well enough in between.
30th Sep 2013 1:33am
30th Sep 2013 2:48am
Chasing smiles -- I like the thought of that......
lovely poem altogether...... :)
lovely poem altogether...... :)
30th Sep 2013 3:53pm
do you think souladareatease has the trademark on the phrase? I do know there is a story about three-peat. Bryon Scott said the phrase win the Lakers won two consecutive NBA titles but it is is coach, Pat Riley, that recorded the word for commercial use.
Thank you for the kind comment.
Thank you for the kind comment.
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 2:08pm
Aye Mate! Lovely times back then for sure..I'm always carried back to the wonder of the innocence of those times...I was immediately reminded of Felix Dennis piece "Snakeskin Boots"
finding true wisdom wasn't something we were at,
...a pity..smiles from the special one so much more satisfying and memorable :)
This piece is a keeper Jazz...Wonderful!
Thanks for sharing :)
finding true wisdom wasn't something we were at,
...a pity..smiles from the special one so much more satisfying and memorable :)
This piece is a keeper Jazz...Wonderful!
Thanks for sharing :)
30th Sep 2013 3:54pm
Anonymous
30th Sep 2013 4:19pm
Wonderful "coming of age" poem...
Oh to be young again....
it was hell....
I liked the poem very much
Kitty
Oh to be young again....
it was hell....
I liked the poem very much
Kitty
30th Sep 2013 9:05pm
I am a bit more selective. I wouldn't mind some youth but not back to high school---more like 19 to about 35.
