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Love your poems...

Poem for competition "someone least expected" - Who is behind this portrait? A DUP poet! But who?

Love your poems, prolifically written
Bonded inkwell with amazing kitten
No constraints in style, but poetry
With a music inside and mystery
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Love the themes you like to write
Deep and whole, sweet and light
The rhythm inside is wonderful
Relaxing, resting and resourceful

Love the faithfulness of your life
Who appears in your poetry nice
Even if you like to exhibit to us
Some part of intimacy precious

Love pictures you like to show
Through avatars, here and now
Which allows us to see in span
How you are loved by your man

Love your comments for others
Allow us to feel your brothers
In my case, so helpful for first
Steps, to avoid surely the worst

Love your style, mine is too stiff
Proofing this poem like plaintiff
Which shows my demonstration
In my capacity for progression

You are a model as you write
Please stay always so bright
If your poetry lights up this site
Hope I can contribute somewhat

Written by malin69

(malin)

Published 28th Sep 2013 | Edited 3rd Oct 2013

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Re: Love your poems...

Anonymous

28th Sep 2013 3:07am

This is quite lovely and what a nice tribute to someone who's poems you admire so much.
i almost guessed the person..but..now i'm not sure :))
Good luck in the comp, it's well deserving !!

malin69 (malin)

- Edited 28th Sep 2013 3:13am

28th Sep 2013 3:12am

The comp is off, and I don't won... But some poets are better than me, not to difficult to be! And perhaps my sort of poem with rhyme is too much rigid and I know that some don't like it!
For the person, I am sure you are right and she knows too!