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Fuck You!!! (may offend some people)
i walk up to her house
i knock on the door
she answers it and invite me in
we say hello
i sit dow
all i can think how this is so weird
then he walks into the room
him
i know who he is
i know what he did
he asked how am i doing today
thinking
if he only knew my rage
oh what i do is something special
i get up and i walk into the kitchen
i sneak a knife from the drawer
then i go to the fridge
to get myself something to eat
i ask for a phone
i make a call
a few minutes later she shows up
all of us sitting down
so civil but not for long
i get up and grab the bitch by the throat
drag her into her room
tie her up
then i leave the room
he tries to go after me
bitch sit back down as i hold the knife to his throat
as he sits down
she grabs him by his fucking balls
i follow smiling
i smile as she pins him to the wall
she slowly rubs his thigh
slowly she smiles as he struggles
then she finds it
she grabs his erect dickshe starts stroking his dick
then she gets on her knees
then her red lips begin to slowlystrokehis dick
all he can do is watch her
when I walk up to the bitch
now my turn
now i take the knife and cut off her shirt and bra
she struggles in a futile attempt to break free from his iron grasp
She yells and screams as she is brutally raped
his dick bloody and his revenge not quite satisfied
he goes in for seconds
destroying the once beautiful thing
now it lay in a bloody mangled mess
he picks up his knife and with a smile slits her throat
laughing at her pain
next you
he walks up to him and he shoves the knife into his throat with glee
now lay two lovers
both bloody and dead
now disgraced by their grim reapers
i knock on the door
she answers it and invite me in
we say hello
i sit dow
all i can think how this is so weird
then he walks into the room
him
i know who he is
i know what he did
he asked how am i doing today
thinking
if he only knew my rage
oh what i do is something special
i get up and i walk into the kitchen
i sneak a knife from the drawer
then i go to the fridge
to get myself something to eat
i ask for a phone
i make a call
a few minutes later she shows up
all of us sitting down
so civil but not for long
i get up and grab the bitch by the throat
drag her into her room
tie her up
then i leave the room
he tries to go after me
bitch sit back down as i hold the knife to his throat
as he sits down
she grabs him by his fucking balls
i follow smiling
i smile as she pins him to the wall
she slowly rubs his thigh
slowly she smiles as he struggles
then she finds it
she grabs his erect dickshe starts stroking his dick
then she gets on her knees
then her red lips begin to slowlystrokehis dick
all he can do is watch her
when I walk up to the bitch
now my turn
now i take the knife and cut off her shirt and bra
she struggles in a futile attempt to break free from his iron grasp
She yells and screams as she is brutally raped
his dick bloody and his revenge not quite satisfied
he goes in for seconds
destroying the once beautiful thing
now it lay in a bloody mangled mess
he picks up his knife and with a smile slits her throat
laughing at her pain
next you
he walks up to him and he shoves the knife into his throat with glee
now lay two lovers
both bloody and dead
now disgraced by their grim reapers
Published 22nd Sep 2013
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22nd Sep 2013 8:25am
Hello. This is a good piece of writing but I did struggle a bit working out who was who. I don't think my issue was the major player and it may of even distracted from this piece and I guess I worked it out on my second read. A dark piece but intriguing. Ty Syn
17th Oct 2013 11:24pm
This is a really good read, but it can be confusing. Figuring out who was who could be difficult at times. But the longer it went on, the easier it was to understand. Well done though
30th Dec 2013 6:48am
besides the above mentioned confusion about who was who... i loved this! nothing like a little blood and gut with your morning erotica.
