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Addictions

Cigarettes �
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�� Vodka
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�� Sex
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�� Sin �
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Like a conniving temptress
Allure of the wicked pleasures �
Beckoning the addict in �
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�� Cuts �
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�� Burns �
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�� Blood
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Masochism
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Self prescribed body medication �
Inflicted by ones own hands �
Seeking tranquil, stinging asylum
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Pinned down �
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�� Ass smacking
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�� Hair pulling �
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�� Rough sex �
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The anti pleasure; but its amazing �
Taking it till I can't anymore �
Breathing hard anticipating what's next �
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�� Happy places �
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�� Addictions �
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�� Euphoria
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It's mine

Written by KittyFromHell

Published 21st Sep 2013

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Re: Addictions

ZexionKingdomHeart

21st Sep 2013 7:05pm

Love the creativity and scheme. It is a bit fragment-y, but it does not take away from the message. This is a wonderful write.

Could you do me a favor and check out a few of my poems? My poems have been lacking critique lately.

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Re: Addictions

ZexionKingdomHeart

21st Sep 2013 7:06pm

oops, I just realized I've already asked you to check out my stuff. I apologize.

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Re: Addictions

descase

22nd Sep 2013 5:37pm

I found this to an incredibly interesting and forward write. First, the flow is smooth, but it captures the reality of addiction through definition. The plot scheme is clever too. Well done! Very well done.