I hope... Espero que...( in dual languages)

Wow! I love the language, its sound and intonation. Don't understand it though. Red, you are sooo...beautiful in your expression.

Thank you sweet Grace! Did you see the English version on the right?


Red

That is the beautiful part that I read. Hugs!!

Wonderful!

Such Art the broken Heart-Sad Beauty captured Dear Red- Be well My Friend

Thank you Soul, your comment feels like a warm hug.


Red

You expressed your true sentiments well Red!

Such talent...enjoyed!

Strider

Thanks ol boy, I tried to write it the way I felt it.

Red

You know I had to turn up my font size and get my glasses, and oh boy what a lovely ink spill you've created. This message was flawless! Gorgeous grouping of words but the second stanza from the end was sheer beauty! You know I heart this, Red! Xo

Sorry ma but I am glad you found it worth the trouble, thank you so much!

Red

Tu poema tiene tanta expresión y temas. Lo disfruté mucho. Fantastico. Me gusta el poema.

Gracias amigo!


Red

A beautifully sad write Gypsy. So much depth and sorrow.  Love the last lines, such honesty my dear.

Thank you my sweet sis, coming from you that is high praise indeed!

Red

Muy bien mi amiga bonita...mucho gusto!

You did it again...the beauty of your poem combined with such artful taste is exquisite!
Sealing it with the romantic sound of your language makes it even better.

Gracias Vic!

I so enjoy your lovely comments, I am tickled pink that you liked this piece, thank you.

Red

en cada lagrima...te encuentro. comprendo bien el sentimiento aqui!
a veces, pienso que voy a escribir algo asi, en espanol pero todavia prefiero hacer mi's poema en Ingles :-)
bravo chica!!

Que maravilla, tu espanol es estupendo chica!Claro que debes escribir en el idioma que mas comodo sea para ti, yo escribo en los dos porque en mi casa siempre se hablo los dos idiomas y yo estudie en la universidad en mi pais. Gracia por leer y comentar esta pieza.


Red

Interesting in that generally we develop hopes based on new things happening in the future rather than grounded in a past relationship.

He was one of my greatest loves Jazzy, I met him when  I was nineteen and found him again a while back.some things change and some things don't,
Thanks for reading.

Red

oh I didn't pick up on the "found him again a while back" part. Guess I should look closer next time!

:)

A painful heartfelt write very deep these waters of pain are in there beauty.. peace Crim

Thank so much my sweet one, yes much pain but also much love.

Red