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Lasting Love
He blows the dust from my cover
while gently holding me bare,
his hand glides over my soft
outer shell,
I lean into his space connecting
our passion with hungry
wet breath,
Turning the pages I feel us
gathering together touching
freely,
His desire brings me to life
shadowing me in the most
perfect way,
I capture him in my words
embracing his panting
soul,
Closing the book as one,
lasting love in perfect
harmony.
while gently holding me bare,
his hand glides over my soft
outer shell,
I lean into his space connecting
our passion with hungry
wet breath,
Turning the pages I feel us
gathering together touching
freely,
His desire brings me to life
shadowing me in the most
perfect way,
I capture him in my words
embracing his panting
soul,
Closing the book as one,
lasting love in perfect
harmony.
Published 16th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
16th Sep 2013 11:40pm
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17th Sep 2013 1:27am
Always like when you comment Gabriel ...thank you my friend for reading! :)
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16th Sep 2013 11:41pm
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 1:17am
Tommie, the first line is so evocative of a treasured beauty that has laid unnoticed for too long on the shelf until reawakened once again by true love...or something like that :D Well done, bring that awesome feeling back to life with your words :)
17th Sep 2013 1:31am
Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 1:39am
I love that line! You revive me :D
17th Sep 2013 1:49am
Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 4:59am
I really like this a lot. Well penned and a fantastic job cspturing the feeling
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17th Sep 2013 1:46pm
I have read this again and feel the poem connects powerfully with the picture. The book imagery inspires me to write a poem for this section, 'Like a Book'.
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 2:35pm
well done tl!
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17th Sep 2013 4:37pm
Anonymous
17th Sep 2013 6:55pm
I'm still writing crude erotica - someday I'll have the talent to write stuff like this! So subtle yet powerful at the same time. If I could describe it in one word it would be: passion. I loved the book metaphor too. You've really taken things to the next level, Tommie, don't ever stop! Love this!
17th Sep 2013 10:23pm
