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feeling her touch…
I can’t give you what you want she said,
her head on my chest -
only then
did I realise
what it was
I felt…
her head on my chest -
only then
did I realise
what it was
I felt…
Published 13th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 8:26pm
Romantically, lovely....the simple
can be said with no words....
can be said with no words....
13th Sep 2013 9:41pm
13th Sep 2013 8:38pm
Such a romantic situation and then those (s)words - that sounds so sad. A deep poem, J..
13th Sep 2013 9:40pm
Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 8:48pm
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13th Sep 2013 9:58pm
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13th Sep 2013 8:50pm
With but a single,unpretentious act of tender contact, desires of the heart become transparent.
Wistfully magic.
Wistfully magic.
13th Sep 2013 9:38pm
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 9:22pm
you are a master with these
what I call "love-spurt" writes
well done
jagracia
Strider
what I call "love-spurt" writes
well done
jagracia
Strider
13th Sep 2013 9:35pm
14th Sep 2013 5:54am
14th Sep 2013 5:52pm
I admire the simplicity in your writing. Can I suggest a write? I woud love to see what a write by you titled "Skin".
