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Elusive Love
Elusive love listen, I can no longer hide...
Feelings of loneliness, as they corrode inside
While layers of emotions armor.. project false pride
I wish to open your heart to love...before I die
Feelings of loneliness, as they corrode inside
While layers of emotions armor... project false pride
I wish to open your heart to love... before I die
As it's power engulfs our hearts together, side by side
While layers of emotions armor... project false pride
I wish to open your heart to love... before I die
As it's power engulfs our hearts together, side by side
Elusive love listen, I can no longer hide...
If you open your heart to me...
Purest tears of joy only will I cry.
Feelings of loneliness, as they corrode inside
While layers of emotions armor.. project false pride
I wish to open your heart to love...before I die
Feelings of loneliness, as they corrode inside
While layers of emotions armor... project false pride
I wish to open your heart to love... before I die
As it's power engulfs our hearts together, side by side
While layers of emotions armor... project false pride
I wish to open your heart to love... before I die
As it's power engulfs our hearts together, side by side
Elusive love listen, I can no longer hide...
If you open your heart to me...
Purest tears of joy only will I cry.
Published 10th Sep 2013
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10th Sep 2013 6:43pm
Give her time. She'll open her heart to you...before you die.
Lovely write,P (:
Lovely write,P (:
10th Sep 2013 6:48pm
Give WHO time? lol there's no her needing time... Just me doing my dreaming again lol BUT thank you for ur sweet comment n thoughts :)
10th Sep 2013 7:25pm
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10th Sep 2013 6:56pm
"While layers of emotions armor... project false pride
I wish to open your heart to love... before I die "
Something about this line catches me--haven't put my finger one it...at any rate enjoyed!
I wish to open your heart to love... before I die "
Something about this line catches me--haven't put my finger one it...at any rate enjoyed!
10th Sep 2013 7:03pm
Well when u do I'd be interested in knowing hat it is plz? lol
In the meantime, thank you so very much! I will be by your way to return the favor :)
In the meantime, thank you so very much! I will be by your way to return the favor :)
10th Sep 2013 7:28pm
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 7:39pm
This is very beautiful as always. That open heart will receive such a blessing to hold yours. :)
10th Sep 2013 7:56pm
How sweet you are to say that! Thank you my friend
I truly appreciate that! :)
I truly appreciate that! :)
10th Sep 2013 8:02pm
10th Sep 2013 8:11pm
Well I'm not sure, I just know it 'came' to me this way n that's how I inked it :) thank you my sweetness I'm so grateful to
you always :)
you always :)
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 8:09pm
Lovely and romantic, who wouldn't open their heart to this :)
10th Sep 2013 8:39pm
Aaaawwwww thank you! you stamped a big smile
on my mug lol appreciate you! :)
on my mug lol appreciate you! :)
Anonymous
10th Sep 2013 8:13pm
touching, heartfelt..beautiful work :-)
10th Sep 2013 8:47pm
Hi there my friend, good seeing u on my page again! :) thanks, truly grateful for your support :)
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12th Sep 2013 11:58pm
Elusive love is like a lover chasing after invisible love. Love never has to be search for or caught,.....it just happens.
Love this! Xo
Missed ya fella...
Love this! Xo
Missed ya fella...
13th Sep 2013 3:25am
Oh I know ur right! BUT tell it to a lonely heart!
lol missed u back my dear :) thank u so much!
lol missed u back my dear :) thank u so much!
15th Sep 2013 3:22am
15th Sep 2013 5:02am
Aaaawwww u super sweetie you! lol
Thank u my dear friend, truly humbled, n beaming with joy you honored me once more :)
Thank u my dear friend, truly humbled, n beaming with joy you honored me once more :)
