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'Tsunami of the Heart'
Oh Lady...
I got a real, real...serious problem
n' I been wonderin' how to solve 'em
thinkin' in my mind, I'm deeply sinkin' in
So where I may find the perfect superlatives
become more a need to burst into expletives
to push, the point that pretty little words
just don't get the nail hit with same gist
n' I been racin' back n' forth fiddlin' with this...
WHAT THE FUCK,
HOW THE HELL
WHERE DID YOU
GET THE FUCKING NERVE...
...to steal my heart,
along with my soul,
mired in the dark...
you beautiful wonder,
see the passion you spark?
angel of my life you slayed me,
moth to your flame
n' I whallow with no shame
willingly surrenderin' to you
in love's tempestuous game...
I got a real, real...serious problem
n' I been wonderin' how to solve 'em
thinkin' in my mind, I'm deeply sinkin' in
So where I may find the perfect superlatives
become more a need to burst into expletives
to push, the point that pretty little words
just don't get the nail hit with same gist
n' I been racin' back n' forth fiddlin' with this...
WHAT THE FUCK,
HOW THE HELL
WHERE DID YOU
GET THE FUCKING NERVE...
...to steal my heart,
along with my soul,
mired in the dark...
you beautiful wonder,
see the passion you spark?
angel of my life you slayed me,
moth to your flame
n' I whallow with no shame
willingly surrenderin' to you
in love's tempestuous game...
Published 13th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
13th Sep 2013 3:05pm
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13th Sep 2013 3:06pm
13th Sep 2013 5:14pm
So, she came with the power of a tsunami, without permission, took your heart and soul; like a thief in the night, taking what she wanted;..... You?! But all she had to do was ask and you would willingly give to your angel freely?
*Where's the fun in that?* haha...
Nicely done fella....xo
*Where's the fun in that?* haha...
Nicely done fella....xo
13th Sep 2013 9:33pm
Yea, what u said lol thank you my precious one
honored as always by ur support :)
honored as always by ur support :)
13th Sep 2013 7:21pm
13th Sep 2013 9:35pm
Aaaawww well it would take a small lifetime to explain it all lol
thank you sweetie, truly grateful for ur support always :)
thank you sweetie, truly grateful for ur support always :)
13th Sep 2013 11:31pm
14th Sep 2013 5:45am
Thank you my sweet lady, I'm so pleased you liked this n for your continued support :)
Anonymous
14th Sep 2013 2:24am
It certainly is a tsunami of passion right from the heart, great scribe PIkM :)
14th Sep 2013 5:46am
Yea I guess it got a lol passionate huh? Lol
Truly, I thank you sweetness n I appreciate you so much :)
Truly, I thank you sweetness n I appreciate you so much :)
14th Sep 2013 8:27am
14th Sep 2013 1:27pm
Aaaaawwww well here catch! I'm tossing you a preserver to save your life! hang on n I'll pull u out! lol thank you my dear sweet Brinda, I truly appreciate you :)
14th Sep 2013 1:25pm
14th Sep 2013 2:01pm
Wow, I'm so happy to see you visited my page! Thank you my dear, I'm honored n grateful :)
