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Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 4:59pm
Empathy is key in that flow of yours red
well written...
strider!
well written...
strider!
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
9th Sep 2013 5:01pm
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
9th Sep 2013 5:01pm
YUP YUP... truly, truly agree n feel you on this all day my dear! ART N AGONY, a title that in itself speaks volumes! brava poetess! :)
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
9th Sep 2013 5:37pm
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 5:35pm
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9th Sep 2013 5:38pm
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
Anonymous
9th Sep 2013 8:37pm
There came a point (by the second stanza) in which I became immersed in the poem. A slightly detached, by soothing tone here. I was enthralled by this diction. My heart felt for the poet. Great.
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
9th Sep 2013 8:59pm
Thank you so much for recognizing the effort made in the diction it was purposely done to indeed make you feel the poets angst and let it become yours, in such pieces I like the soft tones to speak.
Red
Red
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
9th Sep 2013 10:59pm
It makes me so tired sometimes Gypsy. Feel you very much. Wonderful write my dear.
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
9th Sep 2013 11:48pm
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
10th Sep 2013 1:33am
Agony is a good muse, team her up with Art, you become a genius. Beautiful dear Red.
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
10th Sep 2013 12:54pm
Hahaha I like that Grace, indeed! Thank you sweet Graces for reading my work.
Red
Red
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
10th Sep 2013 2:28am
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10th Sep 2013 12:55pm
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
10th Sep 2013 3:22am
Always one with that thing aren't Ya Dear Red?
Artiste'
stomach Punch Dear-with the Beautiful Hand!!!
Artiste'
stomach Punch Dear-with the Beautiful Hand!!!
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
10th Sep 2013 12:57pm
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
13th Sep 2013 00:24am
Your ink is poetic 'art' hunny and I was in complete 'agony' missing it! Beautiful piece!Xo
Missed ya ma...xo
Missed ya ma...xo
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
13th Sep 2013 3:36am
Hey there gorgeous where have been hiding yourself? Thank you very much for stopping by to read and comment, you've been missed!
Red
Red
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
15th Sep 2013 1:28pm
Hello Gypsy Red; Man, "Unassuming, a poet Bleeds words, humbly on parchment or page" Great words here my friend... for me, feel this strongly, in my eyes, the blood is life, bleeding our words is our lifes words written down, as if it is destiny meant to be... Does this make sense, or did ramble on too much again, hehehe...
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
15th Sep 2013 2:26pm
It makes perfect sense to a fellow rambler lol Isn't that what we as poets do, waxing poetically about our woes, wisdoms and our day to day adventures.lol
Thank you so much for reading my work so glad you liked it. :-)
Red
Thank you so much for reading my work so glad you liked it. :-)
Red
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
17th Sep 2013 6:02pm
You flow so smoothly from the observer, to the artist, to one amongst others and then back to observer. Maybe one day I will find myself somewhere within these words.
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
17th Sep 2013 9:48pm
Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
Anonymous
27th Oct 2013 5:45pm
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re: Re: A Poet's Art And Agony
27th Oct 2013 5:49pm
Thank you Michael for taking the time to read it and sharing your views.
Red
Red