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Sew My Eyes Shut
Won’t you sew my eyes shut?
Deny me the pleasure of sight
Allow me to miss the rising sun
Torture me as I walk blindly
To the sound of your haunting whispers
Enchanted by your magic spell
Feeling the ground break beneath
Clinging to the edge, slipping
Falling until I hit rock bottom
Laughing as I lay in absolute pain
Then bring me back to life
Still believing in all of your lies
Won’t you sew my eyes shut again?
They are slowing opening again
Revealing your darkest secrets
Seeing who you really are underneath
An angel and the antichrist all in one
Bring out the best and the worst in me
Only in the bedroom is the feeling mutual
So pull out the thread and your needle
Because I’d rather play dumb and pretend
That you completely belong to me
Oh the price I pay for loving so blindly!
Deny me the pleasure of sight
Allow me to miss the rising sun
Torture me as I walk blindly
To the sound of your haunting whispers
Enchanted by your magic spell
Feeling the ground break beneath
Clinging to the edge, slipping
Falling until I hit rock bottom
Laughing as I lay in absolute pain
Then bring me back to life
Still believing in all of your lies
Won’t you sew my eyes shut again?
They are slowing opening again
Revealing your darkest secrets
Seeing who you really are underneath
An angel and the antichrist all in one
Bring out the best and the worst in me
Only in the bedroom is the feeling mutual
So pull out the thread and your needle
Because I’d rather play dumb and pretend
That you completely belong to me
Oh the price I pay for loving so blindly!
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Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
9th Sep 2013 6:27am
"So pull out the thread and your needle
Because I’d rather play dumb and pretend
That you completely belong to me
Oh the price I pay for loving so blindly!"
Beautiful lines !! Superlike :)
Because I’d rather play dumb and pretend
That you completely belong to me
Oh the price I pay for loving so blindly!"
Beautiful lines !! Superlike :)
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
9th Sep 2013 7:14am
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
9th Sep 2013 8:12am
Wow... Just wow... I have no words that could even do justice to the beauty of this piece. Amazing work like always never stop writing for you would be robbing the world of your glorious work. Amazing simply amazing how you keep amazing me again with your words and thoughts.
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
9th Sep 2013 6:02pm
Thank you so much for the heartfelt comment. That means a lot to me! I'm glad you really enjoy my work, and that someone else can appreciate it as much as I do. Thank you again!
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
10th Sep 2013 2:18pm
love...demands...a...strong...will....you...conveyed...it...with...great...lines...loved...it...totally...
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
16th Sep 2013 6:11am
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15th Sep 2013 2:10pm
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16th Sep 2013 6:13am
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
16th Sep 2013 7:40am
....was hooked on the title and everything that followed blew my mind, Raven! Love It! Xo
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
16th Sep 2013 9:56pm
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
17th Sep 2013 2:55am
Very beautiful! Loved the video. Now i know what your voice sounds like. Haha
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
17th Sep 2013 3:46am
Thanks! Yeah haha not the best voice, but I thought it would be interesting, glad you enjoyed it! :)
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
10th Oct 2013 6:35am
Wow. I'd hate to say I love this because you said you write about your feelings...but I cannot help it. I loved reading this torture so much. Wow.
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
17th Oct 2013 5:12am
Thank you for your very kind words. I embrace the torture as it would seem so don't feel to bad hahaha Glad you enjoyed!
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
28th Feb 2014 12:26pm
Yes...embrace the torture...maybe the only way to end it. All who flee from the pain eventually run into more of it...no escape. Thank you for sharing this so powerful ink :)
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
11th Mar 2014 3:05am
Thank you for the supporting comment! Much appreciated, I am glad you enjoyed it!
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
5th Mar 2014 5:45am
that was a realy good poem i liked it a lot dont ever stop wrighting ok :)
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re: Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
11th Mar 2014 3:07am
Re: Sew My Eyes Shut
Anonymous
15th Aug 2014 4:14am
I really like this, the pain and raw emotion radiates in this piece, great ink man.
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