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Secrets
My secrets are for none to find
They live deep within my heart and mind
Sometimes they come to unfold
Within the pages that I hold
Some know or so they say
But there's Always other ways
The pen emerges chapters unseen
The nights holds.many dreams
Nightmares unfold if secrets ever told
For they are mine alone to live on
In the dark corners of my soul
Sometimes they come to life
Sometimes they give me strife
My secrets exist in another sphere
Escaping from the reality that is here
©7Sept2013
They live deep within my heart and mind
Sometimes they come to unfold
Within the pages that I hold
Some know or so they say
But there's Always other ways
The pen emerges chapters unseen
The nights holds.many dreams
Nightmares unfold if secrets ever told
For they are mine alone to live on
In the dark corners of my soul
Sometimes they come to life
Sometimes they give me strife
My secrets exist in another sphere
Escaping from the reality that is here
©7Sept2013
Published 7th Sep 2013
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 7:35pm
The poem at times feels a bit Poe-ish in its dark melancholy. I'd recommend adding more imagery and other poetic devices, like metaphor and simile, to really make it crackle as a piece of verse. JMHO of course. Thank you for the read.
7th Sep 2013 9:19pm
I originally wrote it from a prompt rather than random feeling sometimes I do tend to be dark as I am coming back to my former self at least some from a very dark place in my life why I hadn't written for awhile I may consider writing a similar with more light thanks for the comment
7th Sep 2013 10:13pm
Secrets Take 2
I have secrets but I'll never say
I fear the ones who will go away
I have secrets none to find
Buried deep hands of time
Like dynamite upon a mine
Ready to explode to who can.carry the load
I hold it hostage deep inside
Emerging from the pen
Chapters only escape to find
It lives in Nights dreams
Awakening those who have seen
I have secrets that I found
I promised I'd bury them away
But they come to arise within
The spirits.of an old friend
In another realm it resides
Awaiting the day no longer to hide
©7Sept2013
I have secrets but I'll never say
I fear the ones who will go away
I have secrets none to find
Buried deep hands of time
Like dynamite upon a mine
Ready to explode to who can.carry the load
I hold it hostage deep inside
Emerging from the pen
Chapters only escape to find
It lives in Nights dreams
Awakening those who have seen
I have secrets that I found
I promised I'd bury them away
But they come to arise within
The spirits.of an old friend
In another realm it resides
Awaiting the day no longer to hide
©7Sept2013
8th Sep 2013 6:05pm
Secrets are best kept
inside, along with hidden wept
Secrets exposed, released from night
heavy the weight freed, now light...
Excellent spill my friend :)
inside, along with hidden wept
Secrets exposed, released from night
heavy the weight freed, now light...
Excellent spill my friend :)
8th Sep 2013 8:14pm
Thank you for comments I have been trying to come back from a very dark place that made writing difficult for close to a year I know I still got a ways to go to get back to where I once was and bypass it but when you go from writing daily to little to none for months we all gotta start somewhere
