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Penetration
You're so damned sweet !!!!
Bitter, dark and chocolate decadence
Your eclair has been filled by my
rich, thick, butter cream.
Overflowing......
.....a deep compression
of my "decorating tool"
mouth salivating as your
sweet tart begins to drool.....
Scintillating......
.......are the memories of all the moments that I have
suckled your toes
kissed your nose
fingers entangle your hair
Nice and slow
my hands inside the waist band
sensuously removing your french lace
underwear.......
Cupping your soft breast
as my hands unfasten each clasp
of your brassiere with such finesse......
.......the auditory stimulation
as my ears find focus on
the frequency of your
gasping, baited breath
Warm, thick, moist lips upon your neck
tracing hungry kisses along
the pulse of your jugular vein
tingles throughout the body
making it so softly
so poetically.....
rain
rain
rain
My fingertips drip with your waters
as you allow me play inside
we dance and we glide
between your thighs, you let me ride....
......so indescribably good.....yet
Insaitiable ....
........my lust will never be satisfied
lest you allow me to completely
penetrate
deeply
your
beautiful
poetic
mind
Bitter, dark and chocolate decadence
Your eclair has been filled by my
rich, thick, butter cream.
Overflowing......
.....a deep compression
of my "decorating tool"
mouth salivating as your
sweet tart begins to drool.....
Scintillating......
.......are the memories of all the moments that I have
suckled your toes
kissed your nose
fingers entangle your hair
Nice and slow
my hands inside the waist band
sensuously removing your french lace
underwear.......
Cupping your soft breast
as my hands unfasten each clasp
of your brassiere with such finesse......
.......the auditory stimulation
as my ears find focus on
the frequency of your
gasping, baited breath
Warm, thick, moist lips upon your neck
tracing hungry kisses along
the pulse of your jugular vein
tingles throughout the body
making it so softly
so poetically.....
rain
rain
rain
My fingertips drip with your waters
as you allow me play inside
we dance and we glide
between your thighs, you let me ride....
......so indescribably good.....yet
Insaitiable ....
........my lust will never be satisfied
lest you allow me to completely
penetrate
deeply
your
beautiful
poetic
mind
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Re: Penetration
Food, rain, the human anatomy, this is a perfect trifecta! And I got two visuals; while I was commenting the picture changed!
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6th Sep 2013 5:39pm
Penetrating memories that creep into the end of a Friday workday.........rushing her home ; )
Thanks bro. Jazz
Thanks bro. Jazz
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Anonymous
6th Sep 2013 5:58pm
MrM,
This is what we've been missing around here....a really good deep erotic penetration.....of the ....mind! Fridays were made for filled eclairs! Damn, that was HOT!!!
tornado
This is what we've been missing around here....a really good deep erotic penetration.....of the ....mind! Fridays were made for filled eclairs! Damn, that was HOT!!!
tornado
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6th Sep 2013 6:04pm
.....and have missed being around here as well. After 5, let's fore go the main course.......she and I can get to dinner 'round 9. Fillin' that damned eclair. Mmmmmmm, let me get a hold of myself here. LOL
Thanks for the read Windy-T
Thanks for the read Windy-T
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18th Sep 2013 3:15am
I give you honesty
I noticed almost every black poet
On this site when they add photos
It reminds of covers
Back in the 40's and 50's
If that's what I have to do
On this site can't be true
To my self
I accept those who accept
Me No sell out or fuck writing
My ink is ethnic take it or leave it
I noticed almost every black poet
On this site when they add photos
It reminds of covers
Back in the 40's and 50's
If that's what I have to do
On this site can't be true
To my self
I accept those who accept
Me No sell out or fuck writing
My ink is ethnic take it or leave it
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19th Sep 2013 8:32pm
^^^^Like dude really? Doesn't remind me of the 40's or 50's,...my favorite era by the way. I'm sure the pic is for visual stimulation; Can ya please focus on his craft instead of irrelevant observation please. Please stop refinemind!
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6th Sep 2013 6:53pm
Indeed this was dripping with Sweet Heat!! love the ending..Wonderfully Crafted Scribe :) i enjoyed!
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6th Sep 2013 7:09pm
Glad that you liked this. I am totally fascinated with your aura.....I really feel your vibe. I've read several of your poems too : )
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 2:28am
Always a pleasure to read you.
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2013 3:29am
Tu est tres probablement correct. =)
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7th Sep 2013 3:44am
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12th Sep 2013 8:26pm
...penetration of the mind can take you into mental bliss. What a lovely surprise to be exposed to your ink once again. You were missed.Xoxo
hey you.....
hey you.....
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14th Sep 2013 5:09pm
Hey U : ) I've missed your presence and our symbiosis. Here's to undeniable connections "TINK"
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20th Oct 2013 4:16pm
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27th Dec 2013 9:48am
You should teach young men how to love women properly. Your work inspires foreplay. Thank you for keeping the spirit alive.
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31st Dec 2013 3:18pm
suckled your toes
kissed your nose
fingers entangle your hair
Nice and slow
my hands inside the waist band
sensuously removing your french lace
underwear.......
Cupping your soft breast
as my hands unfasten each clasp
of your brassiere with such finesse......
Love it.
kissed your nose
fingers entangle your hair
Nice and slow
my hands inside the waist band
sensuously removing your french lace
underwear.......
Cupping your soft breast
as my hands unfasten each clasp
of your brassiere with such finesse......
Love it.
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