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Tempus
I wrote a poem today
not on a piece of paper
but on a moment in time
that has turned
into a sheet of stone
infused with the roots
of my heart
And like all stones
will be spread apart
to crumble into dust
helpless against
time’s relentless passing
not on a piece of paper
but on a moment in time
that has turned
into a sheet of stone
infused with the roots
of my heart
And like all stones
will be spread apart
to crumble into dust
helpless against
time’s relentless passing
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Re: Tempus
Anonymous
5th Sep 2013 10:21pm
excellent jagracia...enough said.
strider
strider
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5th Sep 2013 10:24pm
Re: Tempus
5th Sep 2013 10:32pm
the built in obsolescence
of every bit of existence
is a bit of a blow...really
good poem, tho!
of every bit of existence
is a bit of a blow...really
good poem, tho!
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5th Sep 2013 10:52pm
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5th Sep 2013 11:00pm
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... que tengo miedo a perderte
perderte después ...
Quiero sentirte muy cerca
mirarme en tus ojos
verte junto a mi
piensa que tal vez mañana
yo ya estaré muy lejos,
muy lejos de aquí...
Ahhhhh! Qué lindo, precioso!
perderte después ...
Quiero sentirte muy cerca
mirarme en tus ojos
verte junto a mi
piensa que tal vez mañana
yo ya estaré muy lejos,
muy lejos de aquí...
Ahhhhh! Qué lindo, precioso!
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Re: Tempus
6th Sep 2013 2:09am
So much heart's blood, so much passion. And hey! not all stones will be spread apart, there are some constant, enduring ones, polished and shiny and precious which will be picked up by someone knowing and loving, and kept. Forever.
Chi
Chi
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6th Sep 2013 1:24pm
Re: Tempus
Anonymous
6th Sep 2013 2:37am
And time does not exist...
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re: Re: Tempus
6th Sep 2013 4:27am
Time only exists when we pay attention
to it, so let's forget about it and concentrate
on each other.
to it, so let's forget about it and concentrate
on each other.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
6th Sep 2013 7:38am
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6th Sep 2013 5:06pm