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Angel Eyes
Pain I felt
like a thousand stabs
On distended abdomen
the doctor said
appendicitis, its burst
tears in my eyes
I closed them
to fate I go
A gentle voice
a soothing caress
open your eyes
Look at me
I gazed into his eyes
light brown eyes
deep into my soul
the iris contracted
Gentle he receded
Into the dark
I slept in comfort
as they cut me up
Wake up wake up
someone said
I opened my eyes
but he was gone
Look at me
Into my eyes
the window to my soul
he whispers still
Long ago and far away
the now and then
he lives still
here and there
eyes, deep dark brown.
like a thousand stabs
On distended abdomen
the doctor said
appendicitis, its burst
tears in my eyes
I closed them
to fate I go
A gentle voice
a soothing caress
open your eyes
Look at me
I gazed into his eyes
light brown eyes
deep into my soul
the iris contracted
Gentle he receded
Into the dark
I slept in comfort
as they cut me up
Wake up wake up
someone said
I opened my eyes
but he was gone
Look at me
Into my eyes
the window to my soul
he whispers still
Long ago and far away
the now and then
he lives still
here and there
eyes, deep dark brown.
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4th Sep 2013 3:45pm
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4th Sep 2013 4:13pm
Such a gentle Write of a harsh time-Beautiful Dear Grace-Good luck in the collab!!!
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4th Sep 2013 4:23pm
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4th Sep 2013 6:09pm
A gentle assuring voice will keep you at ease on such a painful time, but the look in the eyes tells a whole lot more! Good luck Grace...
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4th Sep 2013 11:38pm
Thanks EngrVV. I thought I was not going to make it. It was so painful...The man at the OT was so kind. He must have been a surgeon, but I never saw him afterwards.
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 10:15pm
a eerily soothing write and a great entry grace
good luck
strider
good luck
strider
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5th Sep 2013 6:40pm
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- Edited 1st May 2021 7:46am
5th Sep 2013 9:37pm
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