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This portal and You
Gazes of angels
Stares of heroes
Furled wings
Weeping ladies
Eyes of Beauty
Flowers of lavender
Grasses that’s green
Skies so blue
They draw me in
true and through
Avatars of this portal
To the deep Underground
Reflections of you
The inhabitants within
Sighing words
Soapboxes
Rants
Voices of wisdom
Dissention
From all of You
A family within
This portal true
to honest words
Harsh
Cuts
Teaches
But they are all yours
Staring showing self
Within the box
The avatars.
Stares of heroes
Furled wings
Weeping ladies
Eyes of Beauty
Flowers of lavender
Grasses that’s green
Skies so blue
They draw me in
true and through
Avatars of this portal
To the deep Underground
Reflections of you
The inhabitants within
Sighing words
Soapboxes
Rants
Voices of wisdom
Dissention
From all of You
A family within
This portal true
to honest words
Harsh
Cuts
Teaches
But they are all yours
Staring showing self
Within the box
The avatars.
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4th Sep 2013 7:21am
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4th Sep 2013 7:23am
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4th Sep 2013 7:28am
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2013 12:44pm
awesome write grace.
good luck.
strider...
good luck.
strider...
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4th Sep 2013 12:54pm
Re: This portal and You
4th Sep 2013 2:01pm
Showing ourselves within the box, that is deep Grace, food for thought!
Red
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re: Re: This portal and You
4th Sep 2013 2:03pm
Re: This portal and You
4th Sep 2013 2:54pm
A profound piece Grace. Quite the impact for me at the moment.
Wonderful write. All the best in the comp.
Wonderful write. All the best in the comp.
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4th Sep 2013 4:04pm
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4th Sep 2013 4:32pm
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