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I'll Be...
I'll be the lie on his tongue
that he enjoys tasting when
he wants a change of pace
I'll be the truth he needs
when he denies his own
feelings from showing
I'll be the beauty he sees
when he's alone in his
tangled web of innocence
I'll be his mask he wears
when he needs to speak
and feel and be heard
I'll be his reward for bad
thoughts when gossip
sticks to whispered lips
I'll be the truth that cuts
deep and the lies that
cover up the illusion
I'll be the hate others feel
when he keeps coming
back to me to enjoy who he is
that he enjoys tasting when
he wants a change of pace
I'll be the truth he needs
when he denies his own
feelings from showing
I'll be the beauty he sees
when he's alone in his
tangled web of innocence
I'll be his mask he wears
when he needs to speak
and feel and be heard
I'll be his reward for bad
thoughts when gossip
sticks to whispered lips
I'll be the truth that cuts
deep and the lies that
cover up the illusion
I'll be the hate others feel
when he keeps coming
back to me to enjoy who he is
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Re: I'll Be...
2nd Sep 2013 9:22pm
Major lump-in-the-throat tingles for this one :) Beautifully written and the message is so true. You're a poet my friend :D
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re: Re: I'll Be...
2nd Sep 2013 10:54pm
Thanks for reading Gabriel.
I'm flexible ...I believe women are such fabulous liars JUST like men!No matter what "position"... ;)
I'm flexible ...I believe women are such fabulous liars JUST like men!No matter what "position"... ;)
Re: I'll Be...
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2013 10:43pm
excellent little write tl
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3rd Sep 2013 2:45am
Wow... This is amazing n beautiful! You
can make a heart skip a beat with these thoughts
Every man should be so lucky! awesome ink TL! :)
can make a heart skip a beat with these thoughts
Every man should be so lucky! awesome ink TL! :)
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3rd Sep 2013 9:01pm
Reads like a mistress's monologue - particularly verses one, two, five and seven.
Some other commentators' comments about the truth remind me of the Paloma Faith song, Do You Want The Truth or Something Beautiful?
Some other commentators' comments about the truth remind me of the Paloma Faith song, Do You Want The Truth or Something Beautiful?
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3rd Sep 2013 10:05pm