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In Your Arms
I long for you to caress my face
Like the clouds do the sky
You gently touch my covered grace
As my heart flutters I cannot lie
You disrobe my ensconced divine lace
My flower desiring love cries
Imagine your sweet embrace
As the ocean intensely enters a sigh
Like the clouds do the sky
You gently touch my covered grace
As my heart flutters I cannot lie
You disrobe my ensconced divine lace
My flower desiring love cries
Imagine your sweet embrace
As the ocean intensely enters a sigh
Published 23rd Dec 2010
| Edited 24th Dec 2010
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23rd Dec 2010 11:11pm
loved reading this i love rhyming verse and it conjured for me 2 lovers very well done
23rd Dec 2010 11:28pm
Anonymous
24th Dec 2010 9:57am
i really really really like the word choice, lot of clever rhymes too! :D
24th Dec 2010 3:35pm
24th Dec 2010 4:56pm
It's very affectionate, romantic and I like that. It's rare. Was the word 'Image' supposed to be 'Imagine'? Other than that I loved it, particularly the fifth line because it's smart but it doesn't make it cold. Well done!
24th Dec 2010 8:09pm
Yes, should be imagine. I will have to proof read a little better. Thank you for your comments. And Happy Holidays!
Anonymous
12th Aug 2011 12:03pm
I really enjoyed this, thank you for sharing, it made my day!
8th Feb 2012 6:58pm
Thank you for reading. Sorry for the later reply, its been awhile since I have been here.
