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i am a woman
i am a woman
its a certain kind of grace
a quiet power im wild within
my very core,a
whisper of elegance in the swing
of my hips and the sound of
my every word and breakable i
am not, for i have a hushed strength
nestled in my bones
its a certain kind of grace
a quiet power im wild within
my very core,a
whisper of elegance in the swing
of my hips and the sound of
my every word and breakable i
am not, for i have a hushed strength
nestled in my bones
Published 29th Aug 2013
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29th Aug 2013 00:54am
29th Aug 2013 00:57am
Anonymous
29th Aug 2013 1:21am
emo, you're a beautiful feminine creature, a woman no doubt. I love this quietly powerful piece.
so, you'll be so kind as to correct the spelling of 'hild' ..hehe please..I'm laughing with you
so, you'll be so kind as to correct the spelling of 'hild' ..hehe please..I'm laughing with you
29th Aug 2013 3:50pm
Anonymous
29th Aug 2013 4:32pm
ah! so, not exactly what I thought. even better!
I thought "I hold.." but "I'm wild..." brings it up another level. Very nice!
my favorite lines:
"a
whisper of elegance in the swing
of my hips and the sound of
my every word"
Beautiful imagery :)
I thought "I hold.." but "I'm wild..." brings it up another level. Very nice!
my favorite lines:
"a
whisper of elegance in the swing
of my hips and the sound of
my every word"
Beautiful imagery :)
30th Aug 2013 00:06am
convoluted_thinker
glad that i suprized you! i enjoy keping people on their toes!!
emo1
glad that i suprized you! i enjoy keping people on their toes!!
emo1
Anonymous
29th Aug 2013 1:59am
A quiet strength is the best kind emo...nice little write
strider
strider
29th Aug 2013 3:54pm
29th Aug 2013 4:40pm
The definition is the title
one can plainly see
in the way you carry yourself
warmth and fierce resiliency
ability to multitask blows me away
simply out of anymore I can say
one can plainly see
in the way you carry yourself
warmth and fierce resiliency
ability to multitask blows me away
simply out of anymore I can say
30th Aug 2013 00:07am
JAZMANOR
thank you for the beautiful poem! and you would know about multitasking!!
emo1
thank you for the beautiful poem! and you would know about multitasking!!
emo1
