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No Fun in Clean
Let's play in the dirt
me and you
have some fun
roll around in the mud
mud so thick
and black
you can't tell what lies beneath
close our eyes
let's dive in
no fears,no excuses
no holding back
let's get dirty
from head to toe
let's have a go
you and me
rolling in the mud,
just good clean fun.
*wrote this in response to a comment made by the lovely and wise Petit_Minou...all in good clean fun :)
me and you
have some fun
roll around in the mud
mud so thick
and black
you can't tell what lies beneath
close our eyes
let's dive in
no fears,no excuses
no holding back
let's get dirty
from head to toe
let's have a go
you and me
rolling in the mud,
just good clean fun.
*wrote this in response to a comment made by the lovely and wise Petit_Minou...all in good clean fun :)
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Re: No Fun in Clean
27th Aug 2013 6:35pm
Re: No Fun in Clean
Anonymous
27th Aug 2013 9:52pm
Oh, that made me smile! If you've every done a Tough Mudder or Warrior Dash, you KNOW what good clean fun getting dirty can be!
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re: Re: No Fun in Clean
28th Aug 2013 00:54am
:)...not a runner,have friends that have ran in both they love em.Impressive,you are a warrior and a tough mudder ha,cool...wrote a poem about running for a friend,will have to post it later.Always glad to make you smile :)
Re: No Fun in Clean
28th Aug 2013 00:56am
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28th Aug 2013 1:15am
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28th Aug 2013 10:10am
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29th Aug 2013 2:14am
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28th Aug 2013 9:32pm
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29th Aug 2013 2:15am
Re: No Fun in Clean
29th Aug 2013 2:43am
Looks like a song.
It may be sung.
Made me think what is under the mud.
A snake or two.
The devil, the singer, The Who.
It may be sung.
Made me think what is under the mud.
A snake or two.
The devil, the singer, The Who.
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Re: No Fun in Clean
3rd Sep 2013 7:11pm
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4th Sep 2013 10:47pm
Re: No Fun in Clean
Anonymous
8th Sep 2013 1:37pm
I'm nostalgic of childhood now :/
BUT this was also slightly erotic. So I don't know what to feel..
I really enjoyed this. :D
BUT this was also slightly erotic. So I don't know what to feel..
I really enjoyed this. :D
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re: Re: No Fun in Clean
8th Sep 2013 2:40pm
Re: No Fun in Clean
27th Sep 2013 12:46pm
A poem that brings smiles to my face! Oh the possibilities of playing in the mud with that special someone. ;)
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re: Re: No Fun in Clean
28th Sep 2013 1:53am