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Spirits in Cloud Nine
Four scented candles glow
On each bathtub’s corners
Red wine bottle almost empty
Evokes warm sensations--bursting bubbles
Petals of fragrant blood-red roses
Lined along the path to the bedroom
Amorous lips locked up, tongues twirling
Yearning, still thirsty for more…
Symphony of soft music fills the dim-lighted room
Earthly desires in synch with every high and low notes
X-ray like vision reveals spirits in cloud nine.
Omnipotence of youth with fervor burning
Rhythmic dance of loving souls entwined
Gives way to climactic release of passions
Again, and again, and again…until morning
Sipping the last drop of nectars to contentment
Memorable moments seem like heaven sent!
On each bathtub’s corners
Red wine bottle almost empty
Evokes warm sensations--bursting bubbles
Petals of fragrant blood-red roses
Lined along the path to the bedroom
Amorous lips locked up, tongues twirling
Yearning, still thirsty for more…
Symphony of soft music fills the dim-lighted room
Earthly desires in synch with every high and low notes
X-ray like vision reveals spirits in cloud nine.
Omnipotence of youth with fervor burning
Rhythmic dance of loving souls entwined
Gives way to climactic release of passions
Again, and again, and again…until morning
Sipping the last drop of nectars to contentment
Memorable moments seem like heaven sent!
Written by
EngrVV
(D_Poetic Engineer)
Published 26th Aug 2013
| Edited 27th Aug 2013
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Re: Spirits in Cloud Nine
Anonymous
26th Aug 2013 5:28pm
Yes, what foreplay, what passion, what results vv!
Told well in your words!
strider
Told well in your words!
strider
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re: Re: Spirits in Cloud Nine
26th Aug 2013 5:34pm
Thanks a lot Strider...I'm glad and honored to be read by a great poet such as you!
It's really an added bonus and moral booster for me, and to everyone else who just like me are struggling with our pens!
It's really an added bonus and moral booster for me, and to everyone else who just like me are struggling with our pens!
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26th Aug 2013 5:30pm
Entered in erotic poems competition on this site...would appreciate any feedback/comment.
Re: Spirits in Cloud Nine
26th Aug 2013 6:40pm
Wow. I thoroughly enjoyed this and longed to be in on that passion! Sensual and invigorating.
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re: Re: Spirits in Cloud Nine
27th Aug 2013 5:41pm
Thanks for the read BloodyTears...I'm glad you enjoyed this piece! Pls. stay tuned...
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26th Aug 2013 8:30pm
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re: Re: Spirits in Cloud Nine
29th Aug 2013 4:03pm
It's an honor for me to be added to your reading list...thank you very much Solomon_Song!
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27th Aug 2013 00:29am
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27th Aug 2013 5:43pm
Coming from a well-versed writer of this genre, that means a lot to me Red...thank you so much. I feel honored and humbled at the same time.
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27th Aug 2013 3:58am
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27th Aug 2013 5:48pm
I consider this as one of my best acrostic poems so far! Like your comment in "Serenity...," seems like I got an edge on acrostic form.
Thank you so much Soul...!
Thank you so much Soul...!
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27th Aug 2013 6:40pm
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27th Aug 2013 11:56am
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27th Aug 2013 5:51pm
May your good wishes provide good karma to the spirits! Sometimes we all need a good push and a whole lot of luck (LOL)!
Thanks a lot mate...
Thanks a lot mate...
Re. Spirits in Cloud Nine
Anonymous
5th Jun 2016 6:32pm
So beautiful...I'm down for this kind of loving any day! ;)
Timid
Timid
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20th Jun 2016 1:47pm
Thanks for the read and your not so timid comment...much appreciated! It's so inviting!