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Toxic Love
The Black mushroom cloud
Filling up my Blue Sky
You blew in like the acid wind,
Disrupting my system
Sending shockwaves
Through my life
creating a toxic haze
You brought fire and heat
To my inner peace
Brown eyes, smoldering your desires
flash burned my need
Your toxic touch scorched
Bore holes in my soul
Keloid my opened wounds
Yet I wasn't aware, or just didn't care
That your love was killing me
My heart didn't recognize the poison
Seeping into my organs
Proliferated in your lies
My inner bleeding unseen
You'd become the cancer
That no other could heal
When you finally left, I felt
The back blast, a vacuum
That sucked up what
Was left of me
I was left weeping
acid tears
of regret
Filling up my Blue Sky
You blew in like the acid wind,
Disrupting my system
Sending shockwaves
Through my life
creating a toxic haze
You brought fire and heat
To my inner peace
Brown eyes, smoldering your desires
flash burned my need
Your toxic touch scorched
Bore holes in my soul
Keloid my opened wounds
Yet I wasn't aware, or just didn't care
That your love was killing me
My heart didn't recognize the poison
Seeping into my organs
Proliferated in your lies
My inner bleeding unseen
You'd become the cancer
That no other could heal
When you finally left, I felt
The back blast, a vacuum
That sucked up what
Was left of me
I was left weeping
acid tears
of regret
Published 26th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
26th Aug 2013 4:05am
Wow! Nothing like getting stomped! This upset me to think someone has hurt my sweet Sis this badly. This was harsh and hard to read the sadness behind it. Xoxo
28th Aug 2013 5:12pm
Thanks Sis!
That poison to my system was many moons ago. I'm healthy, whole ,and wiser today.
Much love Flower
That poison to my system was many moons ago. I'm healthy, whole ,and wiser today.
Much love Flower
26th Aug 2013 11:38am
I've known such love Glynis, it is soul destroying.
Written and expressed so well here. A powerful pen. :)
Written and expressed so well here. A powerful pen. :)
28th Aug 2013 5:25pm
Thank you so much Magda!
The trail of love tears often leads to the one that heals
The trail of love tears often leads to the one that heals
26th Aug 2013 4:27pm
Oh I hope not Red!
It's like Magda said, this kind of love kills the soul daily.
Love you girl:-)
It's like Magda said, this kind of love kills the soul daily.
Love you girl:-)
28th Aug 2013 4:31am
Girl, this hits deep...I love your delivery.
Some of my favs:
My heart didn't recognize the poison
Seeping into my organs
Proliferated in your lies
My inner bleeding unseen
You'd become the cancer
That no other could heal
Ohhhh...how I can so relate; raw and beautiful. Kudos to you! It goes on my list!:)
Some of my favs:
My heart didn't recognize the poison
Seeping into my organs
Proliferated in your lies
My inner bleeding unseen
You'd become the cancer
That no other could heal
Ohhhh...how I can so relate; raw and beautiful. Kudos to you! It goes on my list!:)
28th Aug 2013 5:42pm
ryteoutlet
My heart bleeds, too many of us have gone through this kind of pain. I hope you found the one that healed your wounds.
Thanks Sis!
My heart bleeds, too many of us have gone through this kind of pain. I hope you found the one that healed your wounds.
Thanks Sis!
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