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When You're Angry I Have You
I may not know
a lot of things
it doesn't make
me stupid
I'm really good
at not feeling
does that mean
I'm numb
Some days it's hard
seeing clearly
it doesn't mean
I'm blind
The negativity
pulls you in
faster than
the love
When I'm at
my meanist
is when I need
you most
Sometimes I just
want you all
to myself
When you're angry
I have you
a lot of things
it doesn't make
me stupid
I'm really good
at not feeling
does that mean
I'm numb
Some days it's hard
seeing clearly
it doesn't mean
I'm blind
The negativity
pulls you in
faster than
the love
When I'm at
my meanist
is when I need
you most
Sometimes I just
want you all
to myself
When you're angry
I have you
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26th Aug 2013 1:41am
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26th Aug 2013 4:18am
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Re: When You're Angry I Have You
14th Oct 2013 11:55am
I can't agree more with what Winter said...
very beautifully compose!
When you write... your talent shows like a burst of light!
Darker
very beautifully compose!
When you write... your talent shows like a burst of light!
Darker
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Re: When You're Angry I Have You
15th Oct 2013 5:02am
Re: When You're Angry I Have You
29th Oct 2013 1:22am
Hhhmmm sounds like we know the same woman lol... Seriously, I hear you dude n yup, strange that works
where they can surely see the negative quicker than the heart! well done!
where they can surely see the negative quicker than the heart! well done!
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Re: When You're Angry I Have You
29th Oct 2013 9:00am
Re: When You're Angry I Have You
29th Oct 2013 9:04am
Fenom my man always got me that way :) this is from the heart.. feeling it.. peace Brenda
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