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Love 2 Love U Baby
I swear, that I do!
And I did from the get-go
You touched my mind...&...I let you
Give me your body...Your, precious vessel
Closely nestled, and...Intertwined...With mine
Tender & softly, at times
When we don't go hard
We...Go...gOdly
Me...&...My
...Baby Girl...
*(Look at ya smiling)*
I saw U
Then just looked at the rest of the world
Like, "I'm sorry!...I already, found the one!"
Without seeking...We...found Us
All alone
By the bleachers...In the back of my truck
Behind the bushes, at the park
After dark...
We stroked hearts & We stroked egos
Did things...That should be illegal
And probably was
I didn't care...I was busy
There...Tryna give a fuck
Up in them guts
...NON-STOP...
Without a breather
Hitting spots, when U say, "Right there! Don't stop!"
Either, I interrupt...With the flick of my tongue
Until you plead...For me, to beat it back up
Then, that's what I does
I stroke & I plunge
Just like I belong inside you
I swear, that I do!
And I did from the get-go
Had no need, to be sensible
Or cautious
When, I had...Hope & Promise
Lying in my subconscious
I found You!
The Honest...2 God...Truth
Cocked back like a pistol, ready to shoot
And you blew...me away
In just the right way...Soothing my ache
While making me crave
Your lewd...And lascivious
Mixed with...My crude & obscene
I cherish every minute, measured in thirty pump increments
In sequence with, long dick
Penetration..............................................
In & out, about, every two seconds
I reckon
When I'm in it...I'm wrecking!
I'm turning ho(l)es, into tunnels, yo...
I got the moist getting wetter
I call that...A drenched, kitty-kat getting damper
I swear, that I do!
And I did from the get-go
I entered your void, and you gave me shelter
You let your girl give me pleasure
Now you tell me
Who got it better, than, that?!
Let's see...I got that K-Y jelly for ass, and ashy knees
For when you're down on yours...Going down on me
...Ooh WeE!...
It's like, we try to be, each other's personal whore
You give me what I want
I give you that, and what you need
So, in fact, I'm giving more
I know better...But I can't stop keeping the score
Inking columns, filled with all my wins & all my losses, no-decisions & draws
They say, "The battle is not yours"...I pray, "Ok, Lord...But what about the war?...Or the PTSD, I've suffered from, since the start of my tour?"
All becomes irrelevant...When I get enveloped in
...Your Love...
That's why,
I
Love 2 Love U Baby
I swear, that I do!
And I did from the get-go
~disDain~
And I did from the get-go
You touched my mind...&...I let you
Give me your body...Your, precious vessel
Closely nestled, and...Intertwined...With mine
Tender & softly, at times
When we don't go hard
We...Go...gOdly
Me...&...My
...Baby Girl...
*(Look at ya smiling)*
I saw U
Then just looked at the rest of the world
Like, "I'm sorry!...I already, found the one!"
Without seeking...We...found Us
All alone
By the bleachers...In the back of my truck
Behind the bushes, at the park
After dark...
We stroked hearts & We stroked egos
Did things...That should be illegal
And probably was
I didn't care...I was busy
There...Tryna give a fuck
Up in them guts
...NON-STOP...
Without a breather
Hitting spots, when U say, "Right there! Don't stop!"
Either, I interrupt...With the flick of my tongue
Until you plead...For me, to beat it back up
Then, that's what I does
I stroke & I plunge
Just like I belong inside you
I swear, that I do!
And I did from the get-go
Had no need, to be sensible
Or cautious
When, I had...Hope & Promise
Lying in my subconscious
I found You!
The Honest...2 God...Truth
Cocked back like a pistol, ready to shoot
And you blew...me away
In just the right way...Soothing my ache
While making me crave
Your lewd...And lascivious
Mixed with...My crude & obscene
I cherish every minute, measured in thirty pump increments
In sequence with, long dick
Penetration..............................................
In & out, about, every two seconds
I reckon
When I'm in it...I'm wrecking!
I'm turning ho(l)es, into tunnels, yo...
I got the moist getting wetter
I call that...A drenched, kitty-kat getting damper
I swear, that I do!
And I did from the get-go
I entered your void, and you gave me shelter
You let your girl give me pleasure
Now you tell me
Who got it better, than, that?!
Let's see...I got that K-Y jelly for ass, and ashy knees
For when you're down on yours...Going down on me
...Ooh WeE!...
It's like, we try to be, each other's personal whore
You give me what I want
I give you that, and what you need
So, in fact, I'm giving more
I know better...But I can't stop keeping the score
Inking columns, filled with all my wins & all my losses, no-decisions & draws
They say, "The battle is not yours"...I pray, "Ok, Lord...But what about the war?...Or the PTSD, I've suffered from, since the start of my tour?"
All becomes irrelevant...When I get enveloped in
...Your Love...
That's why,
I
Love 2 Love U Baby
I swear, that I do!
And I did from the get-go
~disDain~
Published 24th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
24th Aug 2013 7:31pm
Loving the lovin'...
Always a pleasure to read when you write.
Always a pleasure to read when you write.
24th Aug 2013 7:37pm
25th Aug 2013 4:33am
Whoop whoop! There it is!! Yo bro. U already know
I love this flow!! So many hot hot lines but one of my very favorite was this: "I entered your void, and you gave me shelter..." That was deeeeeepp!! a fav!
I love this flow!! So many hot hot lines but one of my very favorite was this: "I entered your void, and you gave me shelter..." That was deeeeeepp!! a fav!
26th Aug 2013 3:04pm
25th Aug 2013 4:41am
the divine simplicity of the man/woman connection stated in the raw eloquent still in delivery.
They say, "The battle is not yours"...I pray, "Ok, Lord...But what about the war?...Or the PTSD, I've suffered from, since the start of my tour?" ....this here magnificently exemplifies the truth of the matter...your depth is unsurpassed D...
They say, "The battle is not yours"...I pray, "Ok, Lord...But what about the war?...Or the PTSD, I've suffered from, since the start of my tour?" ....this here magnificently exemplifies the truth of the matter...your depth is unsurpassed D...
26th Aug 2013 3:07pm
27th Nov 2014 8:38pm
It's so rare that people accept the things that they really want from each other and acknowledge what they really feel...these lines bring home a lot of who we are as sexual beings and I applaud you for going there with it. Bravo! I dig real.
"It's like, we try to be, each other's personal whore
You give me what I want
I give you that, and what you need"
"It's like, we try to be, each other's personal whore
You give me what I want
I give you that, and what you need"
30th Sep 2015 4:45am
Thank you for such a kind & sincere comment... I appreciate it wholeheartedly ;-)
