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Light Up
My spaces grow more
Luminous,
With his bright energy
I'm pretty in his
Hands,
We take one another
To far off places,
He tells me I'm like
Silk,
His love lights up as I
Glow,
Operating smoothly
Past delicate surfaces,
I drape
Elegantly,
Around his frame,
Giving him that
Keep him forever
Look,
Bursting at the same
Time
Luminous,
With his bright energy
I'm pretty in his
Hands,
We take one another
To far off places,
He tells me I'm like
Silk,
His love lights up as I
Glow,
Operating smoothly
Past delicate surfaces,
I drape
Elegantly,
Around his frame,
Giving him that
Keep him forever
Look,
Bursting at the same
Time
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Re: Light Up
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23rd Aug 2013 7:47am
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Re: Light Up
23rd Aug 2013 8:02am
Tommie this piece is full of sensual light :) I love this line:
"Giving him that
Keep him forever
Look"
"Giving him that
Keep him forever
Look"
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 11:08am
explosive little write tl!
strider...
strider...
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23rd Aug 2013 12:16pm
Re: Light Up
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 3:08pm
Tommie,
I can see/feel the glow from here! ; ) Loved the silk and drape around him lines; gave your write a soft feeling ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
I can see/feel the glow from here! ; ) Loved the silk and drape around him lines; gave your write a soft feeling ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
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23rd Aug 2013 9:24pm
Mmmmmm u write so yummy TL, need to stop playing n CUM to me n blend ink again lol
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23rd Aug 2013 9:37pm