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In Your Hands
Twisted in your hands
my edges are smooth
under your dirty thoughts
thumb over my naughtiness
our lines cross with you
skimming my curves
and I ride your rigidness
you carry my sound
while I hold your silence
my edges are smooth
under your dirty thoughts
thumb over my naughtiness
our lines cross with you
skimming my curves
and I ride your rigidness
you carry my sound
while I hold your silence
Published 21st Aug 2013
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21st Aug 2013 4:58pm
21st Aug 2013 5:01pm
Anonymous
21st Aug 2013 5:02pm
short but hot tl
strider
strider
21st Aug 2013 5:06pm
Anonymous
21st Aug 2013 5:42pm
This is one of your very best, I envy your style! I love all the wording!
21st Aug 2013 9:39pm
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21st Aug 2013 9:40pm
Anonymous
21st Aug 2013 8:30pm
I wish I was their neighbors...I would've set up lawn chairs and sold tickets...a box office bang. Well done Tommie. :)
21st Aug 2013 9:41pm
21st Aug 2013 9:02pm
Like the contrasts:
Twisted in your hands,
My edges are smooth
and
You carry my sound
While I hold your silence
Twisted in your hands,
My edges are smooth
and
You carry my sound
While I hold your silence
21st Aug 2013 9:42pm
Anonymous
22nd Aug 2013 1:11am
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24th Aug 2013 8:14am
"You carry my sound while I hold your silence" Man, this for me, are VERY powerful words my friend... You got something right there with this piece, Very well done...
24th Aug 2013 12:23pm
