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The World
Beautiful
That was the word you used
Wasn't expecting anything
Beautiful
Means little to some
Means the world to me
Beautiful
It was just me
As I am
Nothing altered
Beautiful
You are open and true
To show you
It was the least I could do
Beautiful
It's how you make me feel
Hold on
You will see
Beautiful
Thank you
That was the word you used
Wasn't expecting anything
Beautiful
Means little to some
Means the world to me
Beautiful
It was just me
As I am
Nothing altered
Beautiful
You are open and true
To show you
It was the least I could do
Beautiful
It's how you make me feel
Hold on
You will see
Beautiful
Thank you
Published 23rd Aug 2013
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 6:26am
I love this. Being made to feel beautiful is an incredible feeling. So well done, love!
23rd Aug 2013 6:36am
Agreed
The word beautiful is right up there for me
Being told I'm beautiful by a man so dam
Honest and true is something I'll take to my grave
For eternity
The word beautiful is right up there for me
Being told I'm beautiful by a man so dam
Honest and true is something I'll take to my grave
For eternity
23rd Aug 2013 7:00am
Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 3:01pm
Lookawaynow,
A single word of simple letters often wields a world of power ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
A single word of simple letters often wields a world of power ; ) Enjoyed!
tornado
23rd Aug 2013 4:53pm
yes tornado
was hoping by doing the one word thing
that people would pause/slow down
sometimes if you read to fast it can get lost
was hoping by doing the one word thing
that people would pause/slow down
sometimes if you read to fast it can get lost
23rd Aug 2013 4:32pm
Very nice! I agree with Petit, Being made to feel beautiful is an incredible feeling. One word, Beautiful, can say so much
23rd Aug 2013 4:53pm
24th Aug 2013 12:54pm
A simple word that opens a bounty ... Her freckles and eyes always do it for me ...
Love this
Love this
