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Withered leaves
Withered leaves await
the coming of the spring
for moisture, light, and growth
But caged animals
hardly notice the change
that fences shut out
the coming of the spring
for moisture, light, and growth
But caged animals
hardly notice the change
that fences shut out
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Re: Withered leaves
20th Aug 2013 8:14pm
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20th Aug 2013 11:33pm
Re: Withered leaves
Anonymous
20th Aug 2013 8:57pm
So very true, animals should have more rights!
Much enjoyed this poem!
Much enjoyed this poem!
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20th Aug 2013 11:35pm
Re: Withered leaves
20th Aug 2013 11:04pm
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20th Aug 2013 11:36pm
Re: Withered leaves
Anonymous
21st Aug 2013 00:54am
I've read this several times. What I get from this is......our lives aren't always what we want them to be. So our desires wilt a way as if we are caged. Living a life we wish we weren't in, but can't get out. Sad!!!!!! :(
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Re: Withered leaves
Anonymous
21st Aug 2013 1:34am
We do get lost in our own lives, don't we? I remember walking to work one day and a flock of geese flying and honking between the highrises, towards the mountains and the rising sun. I hadn't noticed the mountains or the sun for a while, and it came as a bit of a shock to realize they were still there.
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re: Re: Withered leaves
21st Aug 2013 1:34pm
Re: Withered leaves
For those that are 'caged'--literally, and figuratively-..trapped within themselves, separated from those simple things in life that bring soo much pleasure, then they are merely existing,not truly 'living'...w/o quality of-- Life, there is no meaning to-- Life.
A life-Lesson Scribed in Sadness
A life-Lesson Scribed in Sadness
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21st Aug 2013 1:35pm
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Anonymous
23rd Aug 2013 8:00pm
Very good observation
Good write
Good read
Kitty
Good write
Good read
Kitty
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