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daRk DeMoN
If you look inside her eyes, her secrets will appear.
You will feel her sorrowness and you will see her fear.
And if you look more deeper, than anyone can see.
You will see her in chains that will never let her be free.
And if you watch her cry, you'll know how much she's scared.
You'll know how hurt she's been.
You'll know no one's ever cared.
And if you really loved her.
You could feel her pain.
You could give your life for her and relieve her of her strain.
But she is a dark demon who will never let that be.
Because she will never open her eyes for anyone to see.
You will feel her sorrowness and you will see her fear.
And if you look more deeper, than anyone can see.
You will see her in chains that will never let her be free.
And if you watch her cry, you'll know how much she's scared.
You'll know how hurt she's been.
You'll know no one's ever cared.
And if you really loved her.
You could feel her pain.
You could give your life for her and relieve her of her strain.
But she is a dark demon who will never let that be.
Because she will never open her eyes for anyone to see.
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Love it
19th Dec 2010 7:48am
touched me...
24th Dec 2010 6:53pm
It touched me to my soul...I can truly feel you as I have experienced so much pain
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wow
8th Jan 2011 8:25am
this poem was very very good. ur so talented,,mayb u could giv me some advice for my poetry(:
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DeMoN
25th Apr 2011 9:45am
yeah this is a gem alright una.p
i like the content,story line,structure of the whole thing and the little twist at the end.
fair play!!
i like the content,story line,structure of the whole thing and the little twist at the end.
fair play!!
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dark
29th Dec 2011 11:57am
nice piece.really enjoyed it.
your poem is constructed very well.keep it coming.
xxx
your poem is constructed very well.keep it coming.
xxx
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29th Feb 2024 1:30am
This is in the early days of DUP, very cool.
I read this with more of a metaphorical standpoint which delivers a very impactful sense of emotion.
Superb work.
I read this with more of a metaphorical standpoint which delivers a very impactful sense of emotion.
Superb work.
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