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i wanna Love you ...
faithful...
"i promise to
be better"
empty shadows
like
a silhouette
trace these lines
in the dark
with x.ray vision
then sell your
dreams to the
mask of collision
it's not in you
war is for
the
suicidal peace makers
year of the dog
toothless
sanctified free basers
i wanna love you
like it's the end
of the world
but you dress
in table top blues
so inviting
i'm accident prone
yet
the queen won't
dine alone
your heinous
there's
plenty of fools
to go around
hunger has horns
dark darling
they're the ones
whose starving
so
feed them first
divide their worth
i know
its the growth
in attendance
thats alarming
your turn to take
role call
Published 18th Aug 2013
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 6:51am
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18th Aug 2013 11:03am
18th Aug 2013 1:24pm
18th Aug 2013 5:26pm
"war is for
the
suicidal peace makers"
That line really punched me just now...this piece is great...
the
suicidal peace makers"
That line really punched me just now...this piece is great...
Anonymous
18th Aug 2013 6:14pm
Devilish - you are such a good poet...
Thank you for a good read
Kitty
Thank you for a good read
Kitty
19th Aug 2013 00:27am
19th Aug 2013 1:14am
wow this whole piece rolls awesome!!!!!
fluidlike punches... love the attitude and the language used to express it.....
well fn done devilish...
i wanna love you too..........
fluidlike punches... love the attitude and the language used to express it.....
well fn done devilish...
i wanna love you too..........
19th Aug 2013 6:47am
19th Aug 2013 11:26am
wow thank you so much.. names i would of never expected to see here. i'm humbled. wow.
20th Aug 2013 3:04am
3rd Sep 2013 6:57am
Damn... I love this write!!
"trace these lines
in the dark
with x.ray vision
then sell your
dreams to the
mask of collision"
Love those lines!
(^,..,^)
Darker
"trace these lines
in the dark
with x.ray vision
then sell your
dreams to the
mask of collision"
Love those lines!
(^,..,^)
Darker
6th Mar 2017 10:46am
