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Re: Together We Create Wisdom
12th Aug 2013 10:16pm
I feel like I wanna' wash your feet with my hair or something! Ya know, to show the depth and level of respect for your pen, and the profoundness it possess! Okay, maybe feet washing was a tad bit of a stretch; maybe a coupon for a pedicure. o_O
Love this hun! Xo
Love this hun! Xo
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re: Re: Together We Create Wisdom
12th Aug 2013 10:20pm
I'll take the pedi, no complaints here! Thanks sweet Rain, for the support and kind words.
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Re: Together We Create Wisdom
12th Aug 2013 10:29pm
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12th Aug 2013 10:31pm
Re: Together We Create Wisdom
12th Aug 2013 10:49pm
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12th Aug 2013 11:16pm
Re: Together We Create Wisdom
Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 11:14pm
Your ability to write poetry and then visually present it so professionally makes you
PUBLISHABLE.....you have a great webspace and immense talent.....when you feel down...do not
beat yourself up...for someone with your intelligence will rise again......
just sayin
all the best
Kitty
PUBLISHABLE.....you have a great webspace and immense talent.....when you feel down...do not
beat yourself up...for someone with your intelligence will rise again......
just sayin
all the best
Kitty
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re: Re: Together We Create Wisdom
12th Aug 2013 11:18pm
Re: Together We Create Wisdom
12th Aug 2013 11:52pm
This was an excellent comparison
of the two and how they compliment
and restrain each other.
Like you said knowledge is available;
a necessary evil: or it can be evil.
Knowledge puffeth up, but charity edifieth. 2. And if any man think that he knoweth any thing, he knoweth nothing yet as he ought to know.
But Kindness/Charity can put it in its place.
Excellent scribe and insight Gypsy...Thomas
of the two and how they compliment
and restrain each other.
Like you said knowledge is available;
a necessary evil: or it can be evil.
Knowledge puffeth up, but charity edifieth. 2. And if any man think that he knoweth any thing, he knoweth nothing yet as he ought to know.
But Kindness/Charity can put it in its place.
Excellent scribe and insight Gypsy...Thomas
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13th Aug 2013 00:17am
Re: Together We Create Wisdom
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13th Aug 2013 00:07am
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re: Re: Together We Create Wisdom
13th Aug 2013 00:19am
Yes very much so Theo, opposites that combine to create positive chi. Thank you for your comment.
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Re: Together We Create Wisdom
13th Aug 2013 1:16am
Your poetic voice is strong n uniquely
your own, n your wisdom is truly a treasure to behold...I most definitely loved every fantastic word spilled here!!
your own, n your wisdom is truly a treasure to behold...I most definitely loved every fantastic word spilled here!!
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re: Re: Together We Create Wisdom
13th Aug 2013 1:43am
Thank you Poe, glad you liked it, it just flowed easily and I proud with the way it turned out.
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Re: Together We Create Wisdom
Anonymous
13th Aug 2013 2:01am
very yin and yang red....enlightening
thanks
strider
thanks
strider
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13th Aug 2013 12:18pm
Re: Together We Create Wisdom
13th Aug 2013 5:56am
This is a great piece- an intelligent argument which succeeds at an intellectual level yet is framed in wonderful verse.
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re: Re: Together We Create Wisdom
13th Aug 2013 12:23pm
I am extremely humbled by your praise, thank you so very much for highlighting your observations of this piece it is very helpful to know what elements made it work.
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Re: Together We Create Wisdom
Anonymous
14th Aug 2013 2:03pm
Red...you have most certainly penned a gem here...and much needed at that...you're manifestin on another level here!!...a word to the wise from the wise with the words...stellar vibe this is!
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re: Re: Together We Create Wisdom
14th Aug 2013 3:34pm
Naaj... sometimes I am not so wise and in the midst of the turmoil in my life, I lose my words, but I try to remember I am not alone and that I don't know everything that something as simple kindness goes a long way towards healing.Thank you
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Re: United We Create Wisdom
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14th Aug 2013 3:37pm
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14th Aug 2013 3:39pm
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re: Re: United We Create Wisdom
19th Aug 2013 3:58pm
Thank YOU sweets for The generous comment, I am happy you enjoy my work.
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