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Squid Viscious
Biting the pen backwards,
I like to spit ink
blue-black bitch
all over your face
yep,
digest it.
Published 12th Aug 2013
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12th Aug 2013 7:09pm
12th Aug 2013 7:09pm
Anonymous
12th Aug 2013 7:21pm
This one is pure power, Nikki!
12th Aug 2013 9:51pm
13th Aug 2013 3:07am
13th Aug 2013 3:18am
perfect nibble. title rocks. when i first saw the title all i could visualize was a spongebob punk music. lol
awesome nikki!!!!
awesome nikki!!!!
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11th Oct 2013 9:44pm
One of my favorite critters, the squid, & I grew up on Sid, so is there anything I don't like about this poem? The answer would be an emphatic "no".
"blue black bitch all over your face"...haha nice. Gotta let that viscous viciousness out.
Lotta strength in this write. Much appreciated.
"blue black bitch all over your face"...haha nice. Gotta let that viscous viciousness out.
Lotta strength in this write. Much appreciated.
