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Are You OK? Talk To Me-A Haiku
What is wrong, my friend?
Tell me what is on your mind.
I am here for you.
Tell me what is on your mind.
I am here for you.
Published 8th Aug 2013
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8th Aug 2013 10:18am
Anonymous
8th Aug 2013 2:36pm
Very devoted poem. Good job! :)
9th Aug 2013 00:01am
9th Aug 2013 8:25am
Or a shoulder to cry on. These are just words of comfort. Thanks so much for the kind comments. I really appreciated it.
23rd Aug 2013 8:55am
I wish I had someone who was there for me and to listen to my troubles Im sorry I havent been by to read your poems please forgive me
25th Aug 2013 7:28am
It's OK. I forgive you, edward. You will eventually find someone out there that will take time to listen to your troubles or anything else that's on your mind. If not, you can talk to me. Even though I have my own problems to take care of, I will make time for you to cry on my shoulder and I will comfort you. :)
