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First & true, It was always you
Old lover go away!
No! old lover please stay
In my mind
your always there
In my heart from the start
First love, does it ever fade?
Do they ever leave?
Or linger for eternity
My heart and hand have been given away
Old lover be on your way
But still you remain
Forever entangled in my thoughts
I cannot comprehend
Why we are so tied together
It ended 20 years ago
Old love, leave me alone
No, wait please stay
Does anyone else feel this way?
No! old lover please stay
In my mind
your always there
In my heart from the start
First love, does it ever fade?
Do they ever leave?
Or linger for eternity
My heart and hand have been given away
Old lover be on your way
But still you remain
Forever entangled in my thoughts
I cannot comprehend
Why we are so tied together
It ended 20 years ago
Old love, leave me alone
No, wait please stay
Does anyone else feel this way?
Published 7th Aug 2013
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7th Aug 2013 8:41am
Nope! Can't say I do! Old lover, is old and past tense! Nothing about him lingers. lol
Great romantic read! Xo
Great romantic read! Xo
7th Aug 2013 10:38am
This is me every time I meet someone new. My old love never goes away! I feel the same way
7th Aug 2013 5:34pm
My first love lingers... My first husband/father of my first child is past tense. I guess it depends upon the "Man"... But there is just something about my first love. Although I am married (second) and would never turn back, he remains...
7th Aug 2013 6:37pm
I Can relate...sort of though I know that first love is long gone n likely never gave me another thought... I find myself
drifting in my past, wondering... Yup I can relate :)
drifting in my past, wondering... Yup I can relate :)
23rd Aug 2013 7:05am
23rd Aug 2013 3:07pm
Glad to know I'm not alone, I wrote this because he asked me to be friends on FB that day. We had been avoiding each other on Social media for many years and I woke up to a friend request. Strange...
