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Clocks
When will our time be up,
do more living and less
dreaming
Turn should haves into
yes I did it and I'm proud
of it
No more one day I'll, or
when we can we will, say
fuck it
Do it, don't hold back, and
for fucks sake smile while
you do it
Be bad, do good, have secrets
that make you giggle when
you think of them
Eat that piece of cheese cake
and take a second piece home
for later
Call that person that pissed
you off and say hey fucker
I'm still here friend
Our clocks stop ticking than
nothing, too late, things undone
and said would be tragic
do more living and less
dreaming
Turn should haves into
yes I did it and I'm proud
of it
No more one day I'll, or
when we can we will, say
fuck it
Do it, don't hold back, and
for fucks sake smile while
you do it
Be bad, do good, have secrets
that make you giggle when
you think of them
Eat that piece of cheese cake
and take a second piece home
for later
Call that person that pissed
you off and say hey fucker
I'm still here friend
Our clocks stop ticking than
nothing, too late, things undone
and said would be tragic
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- Edited 26th Jul 2022 10:45pm
27th Jul 2013 1:51am
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Re: Clocks
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 3:14am
Enjoyed it tl....strider

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re: Re: Clocks
27th Jul 2013 4:29am
re: Re: Clocks
27th Jul 2013 7:50am
Re: Clocks
27th Jul 2013 9:02am
The first five verses could be interpreted erotically. (With its underlying tone "Do it now!")
Was the clock in your picture made this way or did something break off? (Not being suggestive, just not seen such a clock shape before.)
Was the clock in your picture made this way or did something break off? (Not being suggestive, just not seen such a clock shape before.)
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re: Re: Clocks
27th Jul 2013 9:13am
I'm going to guess the clock was
made this way, I think the missing/
broken piece is suitable for the write,
which is the main focus, I was
hoping the image would come across
to the reader like "That could be my
clock, better start living!".... ;)
made this way, I think the missing/
broken piece is suitable for the write,
which is the main focus, I was
hoping the image would come across
to the reader like "That could be my
clock, better start living!".... ;)
Re: Clocks
Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 9:56am
I love this stanza:
"Do it, don't hold back, and
for fucks sake smile while
you do it "
I think about these very things all of the time...the would'a, should'a, could'a conundrum.
I like the image because it represents time being eaten away...much like Salvador Dali's melting clocks.
"Do it, don't hold back, and
for fucks sake smile while
you do it "
I think about these very things all of the time...the would'a, should'a, could'a conundrum.
I like the image because it represents time being eaten away...much like Salvador Dali's melting clocks.

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re: Re: Clocks
27th Jul 2013 10:04am
Thank you..thank you..
I too beat myself up over the what if
and other nonsense ...not anymore, I'm
over it, live on my friend and enjoy!
I too beat myself up over the what if
and other nonsense ...not anymore, I'm
over it, live on my friend and enjoy!
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Anonymous
27th Jul 2013 10:09am
I'm gonna take your advice :)

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Re: Clocks
27th Jul 2013 6:31pm
Very inspirational and real :-) reminds me of the track "Clocks" by Coldplay...
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re: Re: Clocks
27th Jul 2013 8:45pm
Re: Clocks
29th Jul 2013 7:12pm
Call that person that pissed
you off and say hey fucker
I'm still here friend
cool line...:D
you off and say hey fucker
I'm still here friend
cool line...:D
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re: Re: Clocks
29th Jul 2013 8:11pm