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Re: Haiku
26th Jul 2013 1:15am
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Awwww....thank you , my friend for taking the time to read my Haiku, and for your thoughtful, lovely comments...all are much appreciated.
i have missed your visits to my world of words!
Glad you stopped by, and that you enjoyed this piece.
i have missed your visits to my world of words!
Glad you stopped by, and that you enjoyed this piece.
Re: Haiku
26th Jul 2013 8:38pm
re: Re: Haiku
26th Jul 2013 9:11pm
Jasper, my Friend,
Thank you deeply for your encouraging words of praise...you know they mean soo much to me!
Thank you deeply for your encouraging words of praise...you know they mean soo much to me!
Re: Haiku
26th Jul 2013 8:39pm
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26th Jul 2013 9:19pm
Atakti,
I thank you most sincerely for your generous words of praise....much appreciated, to be certain!
I thank you most sincerely for your generous words of praise....much appreciated, to be certain!
Re: Haiku
30th Jul 2013 5:19am
I like the imagery of heat melting the heart/soul and the pain flowing like water. Vivid and striking Haiku.
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re: Re: Haiku
5th Aug 2013 00:00am
You honor me with your gracious comments! i am always glad, and grateful whenever i receive a review from a 'new' reader!
Thank you for taking the time to read this piece, and for generous words of praise. ALL are appreciated, to be sure!
Thank you for taking the time to read this piece, and for generous words of praise. ALL are appreciated, to be sure!
Re: Haiku
6th Aug 2013 7:22am
hey
been reading your posted haikus, I like the personal stamp you've put on them.
I'm sorry for pointing this out, but it seems you've an extra syllable knocking about on the second line, easily fixed though by someone with a gift such as yourself.
great stuff, shine on
been reading your posted haikus, I like the personal stamp you've put on them.
I'm sorry for pointing this out, but it seems you've an extra syllable knocking about on the second line, easily fixed though by someone with a gift such as yourself.
great stuff, shine on
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re: Re: Haiku
6th Aug 2013 7:53am
O, i thank you most kindly, Eamonn, for taking the time read this piece, and for your gracious words of praise. i am honored, and humbled.
I am always glad to have a new visitor within my realm! :))
I also appreciate your keen poetic eye...i shall fix that extra count straight away!
I am always glad to have a new visitor within my realm! :))
I also appreciate your keen poetic eye...i shall fix that extra count straight away!
Re: Haiku
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9th Aug 2013 8:53pm
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re: Re: Haiku
9th Aug 2013 9:26pm
AHhhh...Gabriel, mo Cara,
I soo truly appreciate your charming,thoughtful words of praise....as lovely delicate lace upon my soul. {> @-]-]-- <}
I am honored!
Go raibh maith agat xoxo
I soo truly appreciate your charming,thoughtful words of praise....as lovely delicate lace upon my soul. {> @-]-]-- <}
I am honored!
Go raibh maith agat xoxo