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Happiness is...
Happiness is
as life...
Can be
gone...
within
the blinkin'
of an eye
or as quickly
as a breath's exhaled sigh...
Like
soft 'n precious petals
of spring's treasured blooms
each gets wisked away
'pon a brisk morn' breeze's swoon...
Or
it can be
as fleeting as a thought,
which not a moment held
leaving a curiosity piqued..
HAPPINESS...
is that just
'rumor-speak'
they spread, and tell..?
Published 16th Jul 2013
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 4:10pm
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16th Jul 2013 4:29pm
Yes ur right bro. I'm sure it's relative to what we know huh?
Thanks alot for ur continued support, truly appreciate it dude :)
Thanks alot for ur continued support, truly appreciate it dude :)
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 4:26pm
Oh love this..really quite thought provoking :) x
16th Jul 2013 4:31pm
Aaaaaawwww I so wanna hug u right now!! Lol
Thank u sweetie pie I appreciate u! :)
Thank u sweetie pie I appreciate u! :)
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 4:28pm
Just enjoyed this one thoroughly.....
xo
Kitty
xo
Kitty
16th Jul 2013 4:32pm
16th Jul 2013 4:34pm
oh don't be such a meany, love is real and you know it and happiness too we just catch hell finding it! lololol muaaahs
Red
Red
16th Jul 2013 4:43pm
Baa humbug! lol thank u sweetie I know n yet hey the hell we go through makes some jaded so blah! lol I appreciate ya though always :)
16th Jul 2013 5:33pm
...but who spread the rumors of happiness?
Perhaps HAPPY People?!! ah ha..... :)
Nice flow my poet.... Xo
Perhaps HAPPY People?!! ah ha..... :)
Nice flow my poet.... Xo
Lol based on ur comment I'd have to believe ur ONE of the guilty folks! lol but I will forgive u lol thank u sweetness :)
16th Jul 2013 6:03pm
16th Jul 2013 11:01pm
It so right dude happiness is everything :) thanks so much for ur support :)
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 6:21pm
Happiness will come back again.. well we can only hope! : ) Enjoyed!!
16th Jul 2013 11:12pm
Ur thoughts are sweet n very much appreciated my dear lady... Thank u so much :)
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 7:42pm
Love these lines:Like
soft 'n precious petals
of spring's treasured blooms
each gets wisked away
'pon a brisk morn' breeze's swoon..
This felt whimsical and fun:)
soft 'n precious petals
of spring's treasured blooms
each gets wisked away
'pon a brisk morn' breeze's swoon..
This felt whimsical and fun:)
16th Jul 2013 11:14pm
Aaawww sweetie I love ur comment! :) so grateful to u I am as well as I thank u! :)
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 8:39pm
It is fleeting and tenuous. That is why we must grasp what we can, when we can - but not try to hold too tightly.
17th Jul 2013 00:21am
Absolutely, but I'm thinking ifn ya got rope n anchor
We might lasso it an hang in a lil longer... What say u? lol
Thanks babe :)
We might lasso it an hang in a lil longer... What say u? lol
Thanks babe :)
16th Jul 2013 9:06pm
Happiness is ...
escaping death.
Betraying weak heart
Cardiac arrythmias
Draw criss-crossing curves
Chi, who loves your poem because of its well put truth.
escaping death.
Betraying weak heart
Cardiac arrythmias
Draw criss-crossing curves
Chi, who loves your poem because of its well put truth.
17th Jul 2013 00:22am
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 9:36pm
So much truth here. You have left me thinking, which usually a dangerous thing. LOL!!! :)
17th Jul 2013 00:23am
Hey me only tell the truth as I see it, so maybe here I just got lucky huh? lol thankies lady! :)
17th Jul 2013 00:49am
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