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heat escape
Breaking the eventide
in form of barely there
Cunninghams crystal
cool, mountain view
these drips in the forest
lick the humidity
as dragons fly in pair
rolling
upon the rock side
a look of heavens stair
in this liquid
immensity
ninety degree heat leaves
broken a wake, drifting
head wept
one freezes
in piercing stream
like ice sickles tingling
as your tongue rushes under
to partake the never ending
where one can complete
in perfect calm surrender
in form of barely there
Cunninghams crystal
cool, mountain view
these drips in the forest
lick the humidity
as dragons fly in pair
rolling
upon the rock side
a look of heavens stair
in this liquid
immensity
ninety degree heat leaves
broken a wake, drifting
head wept
one freezes
in piercing stream
like ice sickles tingling
as your tongue rushes under
to partake the never ending
where one can complete
in perfect calm surrender
Published 16th Jul 2013
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16th Jul 2013 00:22am
Beautiful imagery and write Soul. A captivating piece.
Brings to mind my time in the Brecon Beacons, drinking from the icy cold springs after hiking for hours without a drink. Sooooo refreshing.
Brings to mind my time in the Brecon Beacons, drinking from the icy cold springs after hiking for hours without a drink. Sooooo refreshing.
16th Jul 2013 00:50am
Thank You Dear Magdalena:)
Indeed such places are treasured-Cunningham falls is just close enough to feel like far away.
Indeed such places are treasured-Cunningham falls is just close enough to feel like far away.
16th Jul 2013 00:59am
This reminds me of that trip to the waterfall in the countryside. The cascades of water and the coolness under the rainforest canopy. Good read, Soul.
16th Jul 2013 1:24am
yes indeed I too was thinking upon that trip-thank You for reading me Dear Grace:)
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16th Jul 2013 1:26am
...like "down at the Mexican border"-gimmie some water??? Thanks Hash appreciate the read Sir!!!
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 1:36am
There are still a few places in the Rockies up here where you can find these icy glacial falls and they taste of purity and ages past.
Lovely words.
Lovely words.
16th Jul 2013 2:00am
Indeed-Nothing like it eh?:)I bet that gorgeous!!! this spot isn't glacial but its from deep springs and mountain stream --so its chilling enough:) Thank You Dear Petit!!!
Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 2:22am
You glow here soul...
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16th Jul 2013 3:13am
Appreciated Carpe Much Sir!!!
You guys have some kick-ass ones over Your way--ever venture?
You guys have some kick-ass ones over Your way--ever venture?
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Anonymous
16th Jul 2013 3:55pm
souladareatease,
Enjoyed the play of the cool off the heat. Speaking of humidity, loved your line:
"these drips in the forest
lick the humidity"
Enjoyed!
tornado
Enjoyed the play of the cool off the heat. Speaking of humidity, loved your line:
"these drips in the forest
lick the humidity"
Enjoyed!
tornado
16th Jul 2013 4:10pm
Greatly appreciated Tornado--hehe I'd expect You to catch that;) Thank You Sir!!!
16th Jul 2013 4:52pm
I would love to escape from this heat! It's hot as hell down here in Louisiana! This read cooled my spirit a little! :)
Enjoyed the gentle breeze of this ink, Soul! Xo
Enjoyed the gentle breeze of this ink, Soul! Xo
16th Jul 2013 10:22pm
Thank You Dear Rain!!!
Indeed it has turned to record temp. and humidity here--keep cool!!!
Indeed it has turned to record temp. and humidity here--keep cool!!!
17th Jul 2013 4:33am
A welcome respite from the heat wave, Soulman. "Cool" write, well done!
17th Jul 2013 2:15pm
17th Jul 2013 9:00am
Fantastic words and imagery, i think i would like to take a holiday there.
Great write
Marcus
Great write
Marcus
17th Jul 2013 2:17pm
Kind You Are Marcus-Appreciated Sir!!!
Indeed-i could just live there in the summer months!!!
Indeed-i could just live there in the summer months!!!
21st Jul 2013 00:00am
Great use of metaphor comparing the waterfalls to stairs of heaven...so calm and soothing, that's all we need in this current heatwave!
21st Jul 2013 1:05am
Thank You Engr-humbled Sir!!!
Indeed--it is Quite taxing out there--I pick raspberries religiously every year...first the black then the red---I think they may shrivel up before I get the chance to get my haul--I have only teased myself with a few handfuls...
Indeed--it is Quite taxing out there--I pick raspberries religiously every year...first the black then the red---I think they may shrivel up before I get the chance to get my haul--I have only teased myself with a few handfuls...
