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this is true as it is heart filled great work Olive:)

I think I should talk to webmistress. This one is one step ahead of my imperfectionist and I think belongs to the same category of poems that reflects a zeal, a longing, a desire often ignored. Good to see Ophie creating a long poem as compared to her previous ones. The more the queen poetess writes, the more I crave for:-)

sweet charlie boy and raja :) thank you both

when every unintending glance invokes a nearly physical reaction... what's a girl to do?! write a poem. [: i feel you! beautifully done.

Perfectly encapsulating the idea that not only words speak volumes.

Wish it was longer :)

I like how you use a bare minimum of words to both maximize the impact of the piece and provoke thought in the reader... A skill I hope to learn by examples such as this.

wow! thanks a lot!

I love how pure and unaffected your poetry is. Simple emotions simply described, yet creating complex reactions.

you're a gem. thanks a lot!

well u certainly have a knack for emotional minimilism once again you convet so much with so little well done

it seems that i do! thanks a lot dear

so much truth filtered into a close-knit group of words

i like your ability to compress an estounding amount of words into just a few phrases.
nice.