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When Love Takes Hold...
When your heart
is full to bursting
and love has you
surely smitten
To where should
the credit be given..?
Can anyone really
handle the intensity
Of love’s thirsting,
needing to feel immensely...
Warm, and cozy
like a late night nap
‘Neath the fireplace lit,
with a love caressing his back
the mind at even keel,
passion’s not seen one so bold
longing to be swallowed whole
by the other lover’s soul...
Desires seep into the mind
like thief in early mornin's hour
sweetest kisses that seal
lips together for all eternity
and promises of tomorrow
ever echo love's power...
is full to bursting
and love has you
surely smitten
To where should
the credit be given..?
Can anyone really
handle the intensity
Of love’s thirsting,
needing to feel immensely...
Warm, and cozy
like a late night nap
‘Neath the fireplace lit,
with a love caressing his back
the mind at even keel,
passion’s not seen one so bold
longing to be swallowed whole
by the other lover’s soul...
Desires seep into the mind
like thief in early mornin's hour
sweetest kisses that seal
lips together for all eternity
and promises of tomorrow
ever echo love's power...
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10th Jul 2013 3:20pm
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 3:33pm
"Loves power" you captured it beautifully here. Love it!! :)
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10th Jul 2013 3:38pm
Thank u, glad you thought so lol I'm truly grateful for ur sweet support always :)
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10th Jul 2013 3:35pm
"promises of tomorrow
ever echo love's power..." Wow deep, need more cafe for that one. :-)
Red
ever echo love's power..." Wow deep, need more cafe for that one. :-)
Red
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re: Re: When Love Takes Hold...
10th Jul 2013 3:40pm
Aaawww u big flatterer you! lol thank u sweetness u got another smile outta me! lol appreciate u much :)
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 4:03pm
very lovely poem
well written
a pleasure to read
x0
Kitty
well written
a pleasure to read
x0
Kitty
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re: Re: When Love Takes Hold...
10th Jul 2013 4:25pm
Aaawww my sweet Kitty, ur wonderful! thank u precious I truly appreciate u! :)
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 4:09pm
Beautifully illuminated:)
Fave Lines: and love has you
surely smitten
Warm, and cozy
like a late night nap
‘Neath the fireplace lit,
longing to be swallowed whole
by the other lover’s soul...
like thief in early mornin's hour
sweetest kisses that seal
lips together for all eternity
and promises of tomorrow
Very romantic and dreamy:)
Fave Lines: and love has you
surely smitten
Warm, and cozy
like a late night nap
‘Neath the fireplace lit,
longing to be swallowed whole
by the other lover’s soul...
like thief in early mornin's hour
sweetest kisses that seal
lips together for all eternity
and promises of tomorrow
Very romantic and dreamy:)
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re: Re: When Love Takes Hold...
10th Jul 2013 4:28pm
Ur name belies somewhat the reality that ur such a beautiful n loving soul... Thank u my dear one, grateful always for u I am :)
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 4:37pm
Thank you so much, that was a sweet
thing to say...I am completely honored:)
thing to say...I am completely honored:)
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10th Jul 2013 8:20pm
Re: When Love Takes Hold...
10th Jul 2013 4:30pm
It is a powerful emotion when someone steals your heart. So hard getting it back when it hurts too much.
Another wonderful write Poetikmind.
Another wonderful write Poetikmind.
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re: Re: When Love Takes Hold...
10th Jul 2013 8:51pm
Yup ur 100% on that my sweetness
n I thank u for the I sight n your support always :)
n I thank u for the I sight n your support always :)
Re: When Love Takes Hold...
11th Jul 2013 1:20am
"the mind at even keel,
passion’s not seen one so bold
longing to be swallowed whole
by the other lover’s soul..."
ahhh that was Breathtaking!! Beautifully Penned Sir :)
passion’s not seen one so bold
longing to be swallowed whole
by the other lover’s soul..."
ahhh that was Breathtaking!! Beautifully Penned Sir :)
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re: Re: When Love Takes Hold...
11th Jul 2013 3:57am
Aaawww ur so amazing to me! Thank u baby, I adore u n gratefully appreciate u n ur support always! :)
Re: When Love Takes Hold...
11th Jul 2013 2:56am
Oh you on some kinda love vibe today, huh?! :)
Let love take you, and hold on tight for the ride! Nice flow sweety! Xo
Let love take you, and hold on tight for the ride! Nice flow sweety! Xo
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re: Re: When Love Takes Hold...
11th Jul 2013 3:59am
Lol yea I guess so but too bad it's all in my mind, unfulfilled wishes n dreams... Haven't meg a single soul that can handle my passion... :( but I'm grateful to u for all u are sweetie :)
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12th Jul 2013 1:23am
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Anonymous
12th Jul 2013 1:58pm
Love the "echo" of this. You're really talented. :)
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12th Jul 2013 2:40pm