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Crazy Day
I am crazy today
I feel like a butterfly
without the butter
or butter without the fly
I see the blue sky
from a tunnel
or is it a funnel
a burrow for my soul
to enter eternity
or is that flying over
above the coloured clouds…
I am crazy today
singing in high octave
trying to drown
this insanity in
in porous silt
I want to be an ostrich
but I can’t bear
the sounds of falling sand
I hear the distant
whispers of demand
be sane be sane be sane
I tell my friend
don’t say a word
I am damaged goods
he laughs hollowly
‘I am damaged too
look at me, hear me
I roar like a whisperer’
I fold in, silently
feeling the arms
Of insanity
Hug me….
I feel like a butterfly
without the butter
or butter without the fly
I see the blue sky
from a tunnel
or is it a funnel
a burrow for my soul
to enter eternity
or is that flying over
above the coloured clouds…
I am crazy today
singing in high octave
trying to drown
this insanity in
in porous silt
I want to be an ostrich
but I can’t bear
the sounds of falling sand
I hear the distant
whispers of demand
be sane be sane be sane
I tell my friend
don’t say a word
I am damaged goods
he laughs hollowly
‘I am damaged too
look at me, hear me
I roar like a whisperer’
I fold in, silently
feeling the arms
Of insanity
Hug me….
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 9th Jul 2013
| Edited 10th Jan 2024
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9th Jul 2013 11:34am
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 11:37am
this was really good, highly relative to many days of my own..good luck on the comp!
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9th Jul 2013 11:47am
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9th Jul 2013 11:46am
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9th Jul 2013 11:51am
A little sad, a little glad and just a little mad...thanks RT. For the kind comment.
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9th Jul 2013 11:55am
I think we become more damaged as we grow, then we become wise and evolve. Another wonderful write Grace. Good luck.
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9th Jul 2013 12:11pm
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Anonymous
9th Jul 2013 12:03pm
Can relate grace...
thanks
strider
thanks
strider
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9th Jul 2013 12:12pm
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9th Jul 2013 12:22pm
Hahaha you my lovely are in good company, hell I am crazy everyday and damaged beyond repair. Well penned my sweet.
Red
Red
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9th Jul 2013 12:44pm
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9th Jul 2013 2:19pm
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2013 3:58pm
A wonderfully penned poem
So many can identify with what you wrote
Good luck in the competition
Hugs
Kitty
So many can identify with what you wrote
Good luck in the competition
Hugs
Kitty
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11th Jul 2013 1:10am
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12th Jul 2013 2:28pm
Ah! so you are human with all the experiences a human needs to mature and be balanced. Else why would you have such a sweet pen.
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12th Jul 2013 2:33pm