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Scrapping off the scabs of Yesterday
Oh God How I loved her.
Soul, and body whole.
Time flew blissfully bye, in a blur
How I cherished the moments we stole.
Soul, and body whole.
We drank of us, life saving water
Regenerated, in heart's entwine we extol
missed her voice...now, the memory grows shorter
Time flew blissfully bye, in a blur
her laughter, her face, her warmth, gone
she was my lifeforce, how can I exist without her?
her vice was me, she was the joy that I put on
How I cherished the moments we stole
Never knew there'd come an end of our day
But now she was gone, and I'm no longer whole
Oh God, How I loved her, now I pray I'll make it
somehow, someway...
Soul, and body whole.
Time flew blissfully bye, in a blur
How I cherished the moments we stole.
Soul, and body whole.
We drank of us, life saving water
Regenerated, in heart's entwine we extol
missed her voice...now, the memory grows shorter
Time flew blissfully bye, in a blur
her laughter, her face, her warmth, gone
she was my lifeforce, how can I exist without her?
her vice was me, she was the joy that I put on
How I cherished the moments we stole
Never knew there'd come an end of our day
But now she was gone, and I'm no longer whole
Oh God, How I loved her, now I pray I'll make it
somehow, someway...
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7th Jul 2013 2:17pm
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7th Jul 2013 3:04pm
Yes... It does my sweetness . Thank u for ur thoughts n ur support always :)
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 3:59pm
Beautifully bittersweet...enjoyed :) x
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 6:14pm
Sweet and sad, char. "she was the joy that I put on" Wonderful line...
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7th Jul 2013 10:11pm
Thank u Cheri I'm happy liked hat line n his ink. Appreciate u always *hug=
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7th Jul 2013 10:21pm
Ur praise make my heart warm... Thank you my dear sweet
one :) appreciate all ur support always :)
one :) appreciate all ur support always :)
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 6:17am
Sad and sweet, the kind of love which forever has scarred your heart. It certainly is a wonderful piece!
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8th Jul 2013 11:05am
yea, I'd be lying if I said it didn't... thank you my sweetness...truly appreciate you...
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 11:00pm
I felt your break all the way thru this. Beautifully written but sad. :)
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10th Jul 2013 1:43am
Yea you felt right... It wasn't easy to spill this
Becuz the pain is as fresh as yesterday although its been a long while ago :( ... I thank u my sweet one, grateful always :)
Becuz the pain is as fresh as yesterday although its been a long while ago :( ... I thank u my sweet one, grateful always :)