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Star light
From much dust adrift the inky void
gathered in hushed loving float
mingled cosmic kisses where pull became thrust
heat so entwined twinkled into starshine
As a universe opens its babied eyes
Cries unto the dark that pierce hearts
wailed in the form of comets
such tails shall never fade
but glow in silvered revelry
speeding through the bosom of being
as the cradle rocks and sways
think not of brink blinks
but universal infinite dreams
one that you can own
one from long ago
there out on an edge hanging by a thread
you can unravel fantasy
by two steps ahead
let it always be known
that a starchild is never alone
for dreams are possible
wherever one roams
walking tall upon the dust
we the flicker of light
radiate
Where shall You shine
gathered in hushed loving float
mingled cosmic kisses where pull became thrust
heat so entwined twinkled into starshine
As a universe opens its babied eyes
Cries unto the dark that pierce hearts
wailed in the form of comets
such tails shall never fade
but glow in silvered revelry
speeding through the bosom of being
as the cradle rocks and sways
think not of brink blinks
but universal infinite dreams
one that you can own
one from long ago
there out on an edge hanging by a thread
you can unravel fantasy
by two steps ahead
let it always be known
that a starchild is never alone
for dreams are possible
wherever one roams
walking tall upon the dust
we the flicker of light
radiate
Where shall You shine
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Re: Star light
7th Jul 2013 6:35am
Dreams are possible indeed, even when you wish upon the stars. Good read Soul.
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7th Jul 2013 6:43am
Re: Star light
7th Jul 2013 7:03am
.....long sigh after reading this.
...as if you reach up and grabbed the shiniest star and held it in your palm. Stunning pen tip! xoxo
...as if you reach up and grabbed the shiniest star and held it in your palm. Stunning pen tip! xoxo
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7th Jul 2013 7:17am
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7th Jul 2013 11:09am
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7th Jul 2013 8:23pm
Re: Star light
Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 12:28pm
Excellent soul....
strider
strider

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re: Re: Star light
7th Jul 2013 8:23pm
Re: Star light
7th Jul 2013 6:16pm
"a starchild is never alone
for dreams are possible
wherever one roams
walking tall upon the dust
we the flicker of light
radiate" Love it especially that part!
Red
for dreams are possible
wherever one roams
walking tall upon the dust
we the flicker of light
radiate" Love it especially that part!
Red
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re: Re: Star light
7th Jul 2013 8:24pm
Re: Star light
Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 8:35pm
In star light all is reflected and from this great mirror pool we can make our wishes come true."Twinkle twinkle little star how I wonder where you are"...Always a pleasure to read your poems, Soul!

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7th Jul 2013 8:41pm
Re: Star light
8th Jul 2013 11:13pm
Very timely with Congress debating NASA funding! Love the way you use personification to describe space.
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Re: Star light
9th Jul 2013 00:01am
Hey its all about the rocket rides right? ;)
hehehe Thanks Jazz--man I could stargaze for hours and hours...read of it...just pure AWE
Didn't make to astronaut but I made it to Space ace!!!
hehehe Thanks Jazz--man I could stargaze for hours and hours...read of it...just pure AWE
Didn't make to astronaut but I made it to Space ace!!!
Re: Star light
12th Jul 2013 7:05pm
The universe depicted in your words
is astounding, I'm taken away by the
visuals you always create.
is astounding, I'm taken away by the
visuals you always create.
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re: Re: Star light
12th Jul 2013 8:48pm