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A Crazy lil Thing called...
LOVE...
Some people, only know love
for a moment
then as fast as it comes,
it's blown away
if ever you find yourself in love,
those emotions, own it
it's a true fact
you're not promised another day
Some people, choke-hold onto love for years
still, time has a way, of lulling love to sleep
be careful if you simmer in this, "they'll leave me soon
I know" fear because, it can be quite possible if it leaves,
now the price to pay is too steep
Some people get blessed with love for a lifetime
yet, what no one thinks of, is that pitfalls and heartbreaks abound
and it isn't til reflections peer into hindsight's window
that love, no matter long it stays, you could find yourself looking around
so accept love's hand, for it's worth one's time
ever aware there's never a limit on how long it stays,
nor when it'll ever go away...
Some people, only know love
for a moment
then as fast as it comes,
it's blown away
if ever you find yourself in love,
those emotions, own it
it's a true fact
you're not promised another day
Some people, choke-hold onto love for years
still, time has a way, of lulling love to sleep
be careful if you simmer in this, "they'll leave me soon
I know" fear because, it can be quite possible if it leaves,
now the price to pay is too steep
Some people get blessed with love for a lifetime
yet, what no one thinks of, is that pitfalls and heartbreaks abound
and it isn't til reflections peer into hindsight's window
that love, no matter long it stays, you could find yourself looking around
so accept love's hand, for it's worth one's time
ever aware there's never a limit on how long it stays,
nor when it'll ever go away...
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Re: A Crazy lil Thing called...
6th Jul 2013 1:52pm
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6th Jul 2013 2:48pm
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 2:18pm
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6th Jul 2013 2:50pm
Ups n downs n spins all round dude for sure! thanks bro. Grateful for the support always :)
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 2:29pm
Insightful..true..enjoyed :) x
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6th Jul 2013 2:52pm
It sucks that to get to this place of 'insightfulness'
that one has usually suffered many painful
trips on love's ride though! Appreciate you precious heart :)
that one has usually suffered many painful
trips on love's ride though! Appreciate you precious heart :)
Re: A Crazy lil Thing called...
Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 2:31pm
Love is that buckin bronco you ain't gonna never tame...still no matter how many times we fall off we always get back on cuz it's on crazy azz ride that we can't get enough of...I second your insight bro...you really help put the thoughts into back perspective in with this poetik reminder..smooth and to the point!
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6th Jul 2013 2:54pm
My Otha brotha from Anotha motha, wad up!! :)
Yea guess I felt another compulsion to spill
some wisdom from my experience...happy to know
we on the same 'plane ride' then again why would we not be? We're brothas!! lol thanks a ton kid, always :)
Yea guess I felt another compulsion to spill
some wisdom from my experience...happy to know
we on the same 'plane ride' then again why would we not be? We're brothas!! lol thanks a ton kid, always :)
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2013 3:18pm
Great poem and the description for it...
the morale of the story, don't take
advantage of it, and if you find love,
cherish it and the simple things that
accompany:)
the morale of the story, don't take
advantage of it, and if you find love,
cherish it and the simple things that
accompany:)
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6th Jul 2013 7:44pm
You are proving to be very special to me my sweetness
I love ur insight n ur continued support of my ink... Thank u! :)
I love ur insight n ur continued support of my ink... Thank u! :)
Re: A Crazy lil Thing called...
6th Jul 2013 3:30pm
life owes us nothing and we are guaranteed nothing all we have is the here and now and maybe if we are lucky a tomorrow, so we need to make what we have count always you may not have another chance tomorrow.Damn good Poe!
Red
Red
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6th Jul 2013 7:55pm
So true it doesn't... Thank I my dear for always
being there for me... So grateful I am :)
being there for me... So grateful I am :)
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 00:30am
Felt all of this deep inside, cher. No tomorrows, only now...
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7th Jul 2013 1:52am
Yup no tomorrow's sweetness... Happy u liked n truly grateful always for ur support :)
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7th Jul 2013 1:24am
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7th Jul 2013 1:54am
Crazy like that glue! Absolutely lol
Thank u my precious dear Rain, appreciate u so much :)
Thank u my precious dear Rain, appreciate u so much :)
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8th Jul 2013 4:17am
Despite the possible pain, better to take that risk than always wonder...very insightful
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8th Jul 2013 4:31am
Yup yup! Besides who doesn't love being in love!? lol
Thank u my sweet one :)
Thank u my sweet one :)
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2013 6:23am
ahh love..highs so high and lows so low and in between it's crazy mad riveting roller coaster ride that we can't live with and can't live without..Enjoyed the read Mr. Poetikmind :)
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8th Jul 2013 11:00am
I am very happy you enjoyed Mrs Nikkimou sending out big hugs n kisses I give to you! l.o.l. :) appreciate the support always :)
Re: A Crazy lil Thing called...
8th Jul 2013 7:08am
It's so true, Poetikmind. Accept love when it comes, hold to it as long as it makes you happy and relish every day you're in love. I love your poem!
Chi
Chi
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8th Jul 2013 11:01am
yes yes, cherish it no matter how long or short the ride, although I hate the pain I def. love the high! l.o.l. thank you...truly greatful for your kindness n support... :)