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Death Art
The moon is my witness
as I weave the shade
I adore how the blood
shines black in its gaze
The victim of no consequence
a canvas for my blade
stealing life with my art
influenced by deep-seated rage
Warm stained hands,lifeless eyes
the mouths empty gape
Their last breath forever mine
a primal euphoric state
Sealed inside my blackened soul
a gallery of sin
deaths art is always calling me
lusting for a masterpiece
to appease the monster within
as I weave the shade
I adore how the blood
shines black in its gaze
The victim of no consequence
a canvas for my blade
stealing life with my art
influenced by deep-seated rage
Warm stained hands,lifeless eyes
the mouths empty gape
Their last breath forever mine
a primal euphoric state
Sealed inside my blackened soul
a gallery of sin
deaths art is always calling me
lusting for a masterpiece
to appease the monster within
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 6th Jul 2013
| Edited 29th Oct 2013
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Re: Death Art
6th Jul 2013 6:05am
This is intense, sheer brutality, but nicely written. Great work here! :)
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6th Jul 2013 7:59am
I like your words here and I really liked them in the workshop bellow thread!! Well done xoxo Gigi
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Anonymous
7th Jul 2013 4:06pm
Dark..menacing read...brilliant :) x
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10th Jul 2013 6:08am
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Thanks Hades,good to hear considering you completely inspired it with your competition.
I never thought about really dark type writing.Opened a can of worms I think.We'll see...
I never thought about really dark type writing.Opened a can of worms I think.We'll see...
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7th Dec 2013 00:18am
AMAZING- very good piece. The way your soul craves killing to appease it is dark. Ruthless. Beautiful brutality inked in this piece.
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